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Sep 05, 2025

To:kazesenken

Cheesy? Maybe. I think the tone of the ending is still kinda going towards that path anyway, so I don't think it'd detract from it, esp if you get creative with the visuals I think it could be neat.

But I do think leaving it for future volumes sound good. And yeah, I get what you mean by your last comment, lolol. Either way, it's a fine ending and I don't have anything against it.

Time and Time Again

Chapter:29

Sep 05, 2025

To:Erwin.W

ofc, jenn is not stupid 😂

telosya ~sunder heaven and slay evil~

Chapter:9

Sep 05, 2025

To:Erwin.W

i mean why not 😂

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Chapter:8

Sep 05, 2025

i'm the second coming of tarantino

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Chapter:5

Sep 05, 2025

Ok, so there is some foreshadowing about how the solution would be reached, which is cool. But I won't lie this feels too easy. I'm aware in-universe it took a lot more time, but it feels like there was two chapters between Gideon losing his time and then Roze saving him.

Though also I 100% expected this so idk, haha. Still nice though, and I don't disapprove of it conceptually.

Time and Time Again

Chapter:29

Sep 04, 2025

To:WALKER

Arigato walker. That does mean a lot I will say, Knowing that you think it hits all the marks kinda does tingle my feelings ngl, and the points you listed were all something I was thinking about/going for while writing. Danke, my man, I'm happy the backstory didn't come out of left field but also complimented the story well enough ╥﹏╥

telosya ~sunder heaven and slay evil~

Chapter:30

Sep 04, 2025

To:kazesenken

I have no idea what #menwritingwomen entails but I shall take it as a good thing (ᗒᗣᗕ)՞

telosya ~sunder heaven and slay evil~

Chapter:30

Sep 04, 2025

To:kazesenken

She does kinda have that vibe lolol

telosya ~sunder heaven and slay evil~

Chapter:29

Sep 04, 2025

To:WALKER

I did consider adding it, but decided against my comedic judgement 😂
I'm happy you like the backstory, Walker!

telosya ~sunder heaven and slay evil~

Chapter:29

Sep 03, 2025

To:Moe Tie

I did wonder if anyone remembered her abilities so I hope it wasn't too confusing lolol. As for the spear head, I have no real clue 😆 I think yes as long as it isn't clumsily put back in and damages more than it did before

telosya ~sunder heaven and slay evil~

Chapter:28

Sep 03, 2025

To:Moe Tie

Thank you momentie, as always your words are much appreciated. I did try to make the characters fun in the short time they were on, heh. #NumaBestGirl indeed

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Chapter:29

Sep 03, 2025

SUMMON THE POWER OF FRIENDSHIPPPPPPPP DO IT NOWWWWWWWWW WATCH THROUGH HIS LIFEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

Time and Time Again

Chapter:28

Sep 03, 2025

To:kazesenken

They're both very big brained as you can see, haha

telosya ~sunder heaven and slay evil~

Chapter:28

Sep 02, 2025

Damn he really showed them despite the fact that he's gonna get scolded a minute later

Otherworldly Acumen: The System's Rigged Against Me!

Chapter:20

Sep 02, 2025

To:Erwin.W

no, billyyyyyyy

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Chapter:7

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