Aug 03, 2022
To:Kya Hon
Oh, thank you very much for the critique and opinions on the work! It's quite high praise to have you call my writing pretty good!
Having read your critique, I can also definitely agree with what you're saying! I think the 4th wall breaking definitely was a relic of what I wanted to go for in the beginning, but since moved from that. A lot of this still needs rewriting so I sincerely appreciate the heads up and your opinion on the matter! If you have anything to say, no matter how harsh, feel free to do so~!
Likewise, I do need to catch up on your story! I haven't been too far into it, so I need to return! Thank you once again!
That being said, I'll have
