Jul 20, 2022
Cool! The lockdowns are finally...down. At least Amy and friends completed that objective! Now to save the world! Or at least everyone in the building.
A few missing punctuations. "I do not mind," she answered while sitting on the remains of the sofa. -> missing comma and full stop.
"Good," answered the idol while she nodded, pleased. "I will now open the door, you two." -> also missing commas and a full stop.