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A bored engineer who wanted to write a little bit as a hobby with the dream of giving up on being an engineer.
Oct 05, 2022
To:Deleted User
But you didn't. C'mon, Tomo, don't worry about these things, I'm just playing around.
Obviously, heights are much more dangerous than fireballs. And, yes, it should be 'part 2' and I have no idea why I left it as 'part 1', it's fixed anyways.
Oct 04, 2022
To:Makech
Amy focuses on what's important in a person no matter how evil this person is... He would be a useful patron if he wasn't, you know, evil and dead.
It was very hard to get this acronym right, you know? It's still a mystery for the future though...
Fox girls are the best. Nothing I can do about it.
To:muishiki
A cavalry composed of 1.5m of pure holy justice even (and some unnamed cops)! Now all we have to know is if one lucky save is enough for Anna to learn that, maybe, having a partner around is a perk... It's wondrous how some protagonists don't know how absolute is the power of friendship.
Oct 03, 2022
She's a hell of an unlucky lass.
Oct 02, 2022
Acrobatic detective goes brrrrrrr!
Glad you can see the absolute truth too.
Oct 01, 2022
Happy to see she managed to get you. Not to be shabby, but Amy is pretty much the strongest point of this whole thingy (in my humble fanboy, and also author but that's minor, opinion).
Why sorry? She's pretty much custom-made to be a pain in the ass. I would be surprised if she was unable to piss you off. I really don't get the 'sorry' in this context...
Yuyo is reaching romcom MC levels of density. She may start drawing the freaking sun closer if things stay as is... This lass is a danger to all humanity, so if those two could kiss already, the whole world would give their thanks.
I was also going to say "DEW IT" there at the end, but my sixth sense is telling me that this is a trick... I would love to be proven wrong though, so be my guest.
Pissing off people may as well be Anna's special skill by this point.
Sep 29, 2022
Old man are weirdly overpowered in stories. Better train to be one of them in the future...
Sep 28, 2022
Glad you liked. Her fighting style is a little weird though, so I wonder if I made it clear enough... This kind of mixed magic and sword fighting sometimes gets me confused.
Also, and if you don't mind, I tried to change the paragraph structure a little in this chapter (which means trying to not split every single line), so could you tell me if it got any better or worse?