Sep 02, 2022
Heheh... References... And more than references, can I consider that you're raising flags there? Can I ship it?! I'll ship it, you know?
On less important notes though, super hearing is much more useful than I thought it would be, eh? Quite interesting. And quite the clever way to introduce a character without even showing Tomoe there, it makes me want to see the other members of the team.
Lastly, I found it a little weird that the West guy was hurrying them during that call in the first chapter, but now he calmly went through all questions. Even if it was to be as such, then it's weird that neither girl commented about it... Also, I can't point out exactly what, but the last paragraph when Hibiki takes a nap sound a little weird. Sorry for not being able to say something more specific...
