Aug 31, 2022

A much more upbeat ending than the real Count of Monte Cristo, but the vibes are still there. Well done reaching the ending, I enjoyed reading it a lot.

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Aug 31, 2022

A SUPER SENTAI TEAM?!!! Sorry, I got a little overexcited there... On more important matters, I still can't manage to choose between Saori and Miwa. One has white hair, the other is a shinigami, too hard to choose...

And in doubts over where they should look for the fifth member, I wait in my camping spot.

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Aug 31, 2022

To:Deleted User

Nah, I'm just playing around. Each person should end their stories as they see fit and I wouldn't be angry due to something minor like that...

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Aug 31, 2022

To:Deleted User

She's certainly less of a murderhobo than them. Her skills will be shown soon enough though...

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Aug 31, 2022

Kiss scene! Kiss scene! Kiss scene!

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Aug 31, 2022

To:Deleted User

My, my! Thank you very much.

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Aug 31, 2022

He Midoryia'd the other K's ass and used the power of friendship to get another ally as every good protagonist should (ignore the mind control bit and let me have my fun).

Something is sus about the whole thing with the code though. Or maybe I'm just reading too deep in it and being bamboozled again...

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Aug 31, 2022

To:Deleted User

Whistles in certainly not using a made-up word there... Fox girls are my favorite too though.

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Aug 31, 2022

To:Deleted User

Karim Imtep even! Although I'm pretty sure I'm never using her full name...

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Aug 31, 2022

To:Deleted User

Ifrits are so cool I keep throwing a bunch of them around... I counted three until the point my drafts are.

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Aug 31, 2022

I call hax! Don't got grabbing other people's things like this.

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Aug 30, 2022

Kuroiwa really can't get a break no matter what and it's way too funny every single time.

Either way, that was such a good ride. Kinda sad it had to end, but I digress... Congrats for finishing, I would say you have a solid chance in the contest (even if I'm just a random bystander).

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Aug 30, 2022

She's jelly! Good sign. Always useful to push the stupid couple to their fated end. Granny Haru understands that, I'm pretty sure.

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Aug 30, 2022

You're a nice gal (now) and all, but... HANDS OFF MY SHIP, MF!!!

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Aug 30, 2022

The dreaded test week... More dangerous than any kaiju for sure.

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