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A bored engineer who wanted to write a little bit as a hobby with the dream of giving up on being an engineer.
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Sep 01, 2022
To:Deleted User
Yeah, better drop that idea. I'll fix the previous ones and just leave the heavy accent as a quirk from now on... Thanks for help, Tomo.
It's a quirky she tries to control. Maybe it didn't get clear enough though... Not looking good this one... I couldn't feel the problems, but there seems to be a lot of them.
Karim is the blonde one and Anna is the redhead... If I mixed up anywhere, I have to fix it. I'll take a look around right now even.
I'm storing that joke for another moment though.
This hypnosis thing is showing to be much more widespread than it seemed to be. Very hard to deal with if they don't find the pattern...
Very harsh... Explains a lot about why he acts as he acts after all that.
They needed a helping hand, not to lose a hand... Someone should broadcast a reading of War of the Worlds on this planet just for the funsies though. Worked once, and it would work even better twice.
To:Steward McOy
Peak gaming realism!
The real stabbinson was actually the mage... And he's totally insane! I love that.
Sudden stabbing stabbinson. No one expects a rogue hidden in plain sight.
Mr. General is a little too paranoid, but I somehow feel he has some reason for that... In other matters, the ability to flee bureaucracy is probably the most powerful skill a mage has, eh? Defeat an almighty force such as this one isn't easy.
Aug 31, 2022
This one was quite fun. Came just expecting just some shenanigans happening at random until the fake couple became a real one, but the plot was much more interesting than that.
Hoping to see that kiss scene in the future still... I can wait though. Congrats for finishing it well.
And lo, the cat-eared mage continues lacking the magnificent tail that would turn him into a catboy. Keep trying though.
Lacked a kiss scene but I can live without it. Well done, author. Yours is a good story overall that you can trust me.
Fourth wall breaks work best when you make them sudden and small though, but that's completely beyond the point.
You heard the character, author. Go do your job!
It seems the robots aren't too bad for now (I learned to never trust cyberpunk). They should find some better ways to treat depression though... Just some counseling or whatever seems to be lacking.