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Aug 26, 2025

To:Mara

Yup! Tarkus snatched him up when the villagers banded together to divert the water (I may go back and add something to indicate that). But yeah he's gonna be even more dangerous than before, you don't know the half of it lol.

These Fated Threads: Volume 1

Chapter:28

Aug 25, 2025

What a terrifying weapon but also such a great way to explore the feelings of guilt Itsuki has been struggling with. Beautiful chapter!!

GRIP: Dragged Into Another World With You

Chapter:16

Aug 25, 2025

Damn, Reathe is like full on chilling types of scary. Something about the line "you can't outrun the wind" that just chills me to the bone. Also, merging powers!? The hell is that about!?

GRIP: Dragged Into Another World With You

Chapter:15

Aug 25, 2025

To:Steampocalypse

Potentially, I mentioned it in the prologue (her looking at an abortion clinic and having the card for one).

These Fated Threads: Volume 1

Chapter:5

Aug 25, 2025

To:R3-DDD3

Thank you!! I like to slowly include those things so you can understand a bit more where her mind is and what's sort of inspiring her decisions.

These Fated Threads: Volume 1

Chapter:2

Aug 25, 2025

To:unlockthelore

Thank you so much! I'm glad that you really enjoyed it and found the pacing to be good, that is always something I worry about.

These Fated Threads: Volume 1

Chapter:1

Aug 25, 2025

I quite enjoyed this though I will say I found it a bit difficult to differentiate between the imp and the "elf" when they were talking. Maybe bold the imp's words, or center them in the page? I'm not 100% sure what would help, but I'm eager to read more about this automaton and his "elf" companion (love that twist btw).

RE:Prophecy

Chapter:3

Aug 25, 2025

To:Mara

Thank you so much Mara, it has been really lovely to see your support for this slow burn queer love story. I'm glad you enjoyed the closing of the arc, the next interlude will give you a bit of a hint on what's next for Evan but as for the other questions, only time will tell! ☺️

These Fated Threads: Volume 1

Chapter:27

Aug 24, 2025

Absolutely love the use of the word psychopomp here, it really has me imagining just this whole array of overworked folks isekai-ing people around. Lovely opening.

Incomprehensible Simplicity

Chapter:0

Aug 24, 2025

To:Mara

For sure!! I definitely wanted to showcase in this chapter the type of Khan he would be, and is trying to be.

These Fated Threads: Volume 1

Chapter:26

Aug 24, 2025

I really love the way you describe how these people view the Goddess, not as this infallible icon but someone who did struggle but overcome those struggles (which is way more inspiring).

The Sun Will Rise Again

Chapter:20

Aug 24, 2025

Yaaaay Aki is awake!!!

The Sun Will Rise Again

Chapter:19

Aug 23, 2025

Absolutely fantastic chapter and a great little action scene (also all of them dealing casually with the slavers while tossing quips is FANTASTIC)!! Also seriously I'll admit I'm smitten with Elora but Lark's got some solid charisma of his own!!

Piracy In Another World: I Will Plunder The System

Chapter:16

Aug 23, 2025

Buff elven lady killing slavers? Damn, just take all my money! Seriously though I really like how quickly Lark adapts and keeps himself composed, it's a subtle thing but it really highlights why he's a good captain/leader.

Piracy In Another World: I Will Plunder The System

Chapter:15

Aug 23, 2025

Okay it's certain now that she can talk, I absolutely adore Pippa. Forever I will stan her and her almighty dark powers.

Piracy In Another World: I Will Plunder The System

Chapter:14

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