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Xiellion

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The webnovel author who decided he was going to write "fun".

registered at: Jun 06, 2022

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Aug 09, 2022

I'm pretty sure winning doesn't mean falsely admitting to having STDs and turning away such a pretty girl lmao

Cullgrade

Chapter:16

Aug 09, 2022

I know this is supposed to introduce new and interesting characters which is all good, but I'm already missing the Azamazing monologuing 😅

Cullgrade

Chapter:15

Aug 09, 2022

Maybe third person is the way to go...adds a sense of mystery and surprise to Azama's actions, because you would have no idea what he's thinking.

That was a rather gruesome end for catboy, ended up being fodder just to show off how badass Azama is.

I was wondering why the title sounded familiar.....

Cullgrade

Chapter:14

Aug 09, 2022

This is just highly my opinion, but I feel like this fight would have been better if you stuck with first person. It feels weird not having that Azama vibe most chapters had. I guess it's understandable if you want to convey the thoughts of both sides though.

Cullgrade

Chapter:13

Aug 08, 2022

Did I just witness booba sword?

Just a heads up, I noticed some punctuation errors like "Why do you always drag me into this."

Dragonoid Chronicles

Chapter:4

Aug 08, 2022

I like how everyone else is chill with being with a human. The only person with a real problem is the dragon princess waifu herself.

Dragonoid Chronicles

Chapter:3

Aug 08, 2022

From waifu to diefu 😅

Hmm, forked tongue huh? Stuff like that is interesting...for certain tastes.

Dragonoid Chronicles

Chapter:2

Aug 08, 2022

To:F.C Fondness

handegg 🥚

Gentleman of the Apocalypse

Chapter:4

Aug 08, 2022

To:Dracors

we need to overwrite your brain 👍

Gentleman of the Apocalypse

Chapter:21

Aug 08, 2022

To:Dracors

Everyone deserves a second chance, but monsters don't deserve a third.

Gentleman of the Apocalypse

Chapter:20

Aug 08, 2022

To:Deleted User

Oh, Ori was really meaning to touch her head, I should probably change it still.

Thanks for mentioning it!

Gentleman of the Apocalypse

Chapter:21

Aug 08, 2022

Dragon Mommy is really cute. Dragon Daddy is a little mean, but I guess it's tough love. Also cute. If you're trying to make your characters interesting, then you're doing great! Dad and Mom don't seem like they'll be important to the story, so I hope I'll find more interesting personalities in the academy.

Dragonoid Chronicles

Chapter:1

Aug 08, 2022

ah yes canned fish, a delicacy we must savour

Cullgrade

Chapter:11

Aug 08, 2022

I've been meaning to say this, but yo reminded me of Chika from Love is War.

Cullgrade

Chapter:10

Aug 08, 2022

Yo, yo.

Cullgrade

Chapter:10

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