Aug 03, 2022
This is pretty much the first novel I've ever finished on Honeyfeed. And I must say, it was definitely worth the read. At the start of the story, she was conflicted with an identity crisis. In the end, she has finally come to accept who she truly is, not giving a care about what others think. Character development, solid. The way you describe things have stimulated my senses multiple times, especially those damned cake descriptions. I really think your writing style is pretty like a flower. I don't want to delve into the worldbuilding aspect, since the story is focused more on the relationship between the two characters, which you pulled off pretty well. The emotions you bring towards the conflict has the potential to touch every reader's heart, I'm referring to those deep moments btw. I won't say this is the most comedic novel ever, since you've focused more on the dark dramatic stuff rather than the funny moments, but that doesn't change the fact that is is definitely a well-written novel in the romance department. It definitely grabbed my heart, it would probably grab other readers as well.
