Aug 10, 2022
This one is largely my opinion, but I feel like there's too much monologuing. Most of what's happening just seems to be on the MC's head, rather than on the characters. Unless the other characters aren't important, it might be better to show off a bit more of their personality.
Hachiya was right when he said his wife didn't seem to have anything special. It's only been 3 chapters though, so I guess she has more time to show off her personality. And her body too I guess 😅