May 07, 2025
PIRAAAAAAAATES!!!! They're GODDAMN pirates!!!!! First ever vacuum pirate..... Oh yeah I like it.
Besides we're truly connected, 'cause, you won't believe me but I also ended my story with a shanty............ ! Probability?
Okay okay, so first congratulations for finishing writing that story on time! It wasn't easy for you but you did it! And that is something you should be proud.
While I can't deny what Mario said about the plot aspect, less developed that in Food Truck in Space, I really enjoyed this story. Somehow it got me more invested that the previous, maybe because of Rom? I like that quirky vacuum character and his insolent personality. Though my preferred one is Jethro he's just...... Incredible. Blessed be Jethro. He killed me once more in that last chapter.
Your insane characters and your humour is decidedly your forte. Congrats!
