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Moon

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A mere traveler into anime/manga's world and writer here to offer you an original novel.

"Chaos' Game" was my first work here; a story focusing on a gang of seven members, as many antiheroes.

Enjoy the journey!

registered at: Jun 20, 2022

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Oct 26, 2025

Piper >>>>

Otherworldly Acumen: The System's Rigged Against Me!

Chapter:17

Oct 26, 2025

We love cliffhangers

Otherworldly Acumen: The System's Rigged Against Me!

Chapter:16

Oct 26, 2025

Finally back to this novel ~w~
I like the world-building there. And 'Berus''s nerd side. No disguise could fool him

RE:Prophecy

Chapter:3

Oct 26, 2025

HAHAHAHAHAHAH The nicknames at the end 😂😂😂 ''Toture Medic Túta'' remains my favourite. It ends as it should end, with a price on their pirates' heads!!! They can now have an argument among themselves about the ones who are worth more gold fufufu.

Well, Ash, that was an enticing story. I think it's the best of you that I've read so far.

Nice world-building with the System and the whole Administrator thingie!!

I usually bite wanting more background to the characters, but even without that, I find it works well with your story since it's some refreshing light-hearted adventures. All the members of the crew have lots of ''presence'' and great various personalities and appearances. They all bring something to the story, Túta and Viola being my favourites. Melody the cutest :3
Though beyond the crew my favourite character is the Supreme Pontiff

I'm gonna have tomatoes thrown at by anyone who sees it, but I had more difficulties with Lark, at least for a good half of the novel. I found him too 'perfect', but his snatchy mouth and the fact he does a bit more of questionable acts in the the last parts I read allow me not to hate him u.u

I don't have any real nitpick to make, since the ones I would have are nullified by the tone of your story. Everything's working because it's part of *that* novel.

'Loved the plot twists. Kenji member of the crew when.

Wishing you the best in the contest. It was a pleasure reading you 🎊🎉