Aug 11, 2025
Okay this chapter lets me a bit dubitative 
First there's a thing confusing me. In the previous chapter you described people living in this house as being the same race as Selene. So some kind of elves. But here, the old woman is described with a ''green skin''. Goblin?..
Then, mmm.... I feel like the passage with the old woman is rushed. With all the time spent to reach her room, I'd have expected a more... meaningful interaction? It felt like an excuse to hint the revelation at the end of the chapter about Selene's lineage. Plus it's Aki saying it while the few lines the grandma had it felt like ''oh, hello, bye." Not the nest phrasing and I'm not sure if I make clear what I try to say,... Have to sleep aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
