Jun 01, 2025
The end........
Fffffff. I wanted to read more chaps 
It is really an enjoyable story you wrote Same! The narration makes it easy to follow and I like it has many many funny moments though viewed through Ryūka's placid eyes. Even as we reach the end there's a switch in the vibe which becomes more melancholic. Based.
The concept itself is really cool and you have a diversified cast ( Kurumi's forever my favourite ) with well-developped personalities. Though I would have loved to have some background for Kurumi and Toukawa. Oh 🤔 come to think of that after what you've shown of Sae's past and resolve I find it unfortunate that there's no scene of Sae and Ryūka having a heartfelt talk or smth. Better developped characters prolly were Ryūka, Sae, Gran Gran ( WHEN GRAN GRAN'S YOUTH EPISODE. ), Ryūka's mother, then Rhino.
The story itself captures all along the essence of anime, for that I find extremely well done. The classics are there all along the chapters, all respected. uwu
I can picture this as an anime tbh!
The last chapter is saddening, the photo thing, the farewell, the last talk with Little Shit's father and the latter's pain to part ways with his melon pan's supplier..... But I agree that it is too bad you ended as that last line. It stinks Sharky's weakness to END IT. It lacks a kind of last scene with everybody gathered ( or not ) and awaiting/assisting the end. You wrote Ryūka playing that sad melody, ( Oh god.... I just imagined her doing that as her last thing... Naur- ) so we all know you can do such things uwu
That said, good anime!!
I'll be there to applause when you win!
