Nov 28, 2025
Niom niom hellow~
Damn I forgot to read in the evening I'm not first ugghhhhhhhh
So, interesting start! 'Really like Mel's personality. Rough, raw, snarky... It's refreshing with all the sweet-soft-perfect girls often portrayed! 'Like how their first encounter almost ended with a suicide. You set well the mood about corrupted society :3
A few remarks. That sounds quite repetitive in the beginning when in 4th paragraph you read ''down the stairs'' ''down the stairs'' ''downstairs'' 💀
Also, you clicked the wrong prompt. It says ''Urban Fantasy'' instead of ''Spotlight Romance''. I know GL is autolose here but to make search results accurate and for other readers.... It'd be great to fix it 🫠