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A mere traveler into anime/manga's world and writer here to offer you an original novel.

"Chaos' Game" was my first work here; a story focusing on a gang of seven members, as many antiheroes.

Enjoy the journey!

registered at: Jun 20, 2022

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Sep 29, 2026

I'M HEEEERREEE YAAAY

Guardian of Wind

Chapter:28

Sep 29, 2026

I didn't get at all what was going on during the first part with Abel, but aside from that niom. Cain is truly the protective kind heheh. Good for Solveig, that dummy needs it

Solveig the Great: I Defeated the Demon King, But If I Feel Insufficient I’ll Explode?!

Chapter:8

Sep 29, 2026

Oshaaaaaaaaa-kuuun. Hi.
Niom chapter. Funny brat XD and I like how the duke protected the maid and his tone dropped like it did to threaten Solveig

Solveig the Great: I Defeated the Demon King, But If I Feel Insufficient I’ll Explode?!

Chapter:7

Sep 29, 2026

To:lolitroy

Pun... Oh. Lou being the grand méchant loup?~

Also I'll be there for the rewrite. Stalking in da darkness.

The Cynical Saintess's Guide to Fabricating Heroes

Chapter:27

Sep 29, 2026

To:lolitroy

So we're heading towards a Frell/Topaz cylinder battle. Roger that.

Ohhh and congrats for finishing in time~

The Cynical Saintess's Guide to Fabricating Heroes

Chapter:27

Sep 29, 2026

To:lolitroy

You're right, take a choccymilk and don't check

The Cynical Saintess's Guide to Fabricating Heroes

Chapter:25

Sep 29, 2026

That was. Really a nice story despite the usual rush :P

I think the best parts (for me, at least) were the very beginning and the hug at the climax. The latter for obvious fangirlism reasons. The first because I was genuinely gripped by the way the first chapter ended shifting the tone to smth so sad... Telling us about Stormy's death. And it was even more brilliant given the sarcastic/comedy/light-hearted tone it began with. Peak.

The characters have well-diversified personalities, and while I don't really understand the Primordial Saintess (not lot about her, maybe me not focused enough etc,) which I never fully understood what her character was about. I think at one moment I thought she was Lou. Anyway! Loved that you focused on how every character in the party is broken, and the idea that they should fix themselves, or how hope to fix the world? I don't especially like Topaz but he was nicely built. And that moment in the forest where he bade farewell to his loved ones was horrid..... So sad. Hate. HATE THE AHTORRIDAHH. Ahem. I mean. Yeah. Alpherson had a crazy lore actually gdi. And, thinking about it, I think I'm just sad, that I would've killed to hear his thoughts about it, like. Crudely. An Alpherson outburst. As for Frell, loved his development. His regrets, the wounds, the loneliness, the smugness, and always trying to make dirty jokes with Pebble. Pebble herself is a very noice MC too. Mimi is my cutie. Stormy was Pebble's Himmel. Niom.

I also like the idea you played with all along, that hope can lead to good or bad outcomes depending who/how it's used.
'Would've loved the scene, or the moment following the hug swallowing evilness to get longer but I def get the race at the end

Overall, a nice bittersweet story about mending your broken friends. I will miss the milkshakes&straws battles (top fav moments)

The Cynical Saintess's Guide to Fabricating Heroes

Chapter:27

Sep 29, 2026

I'LL FOREVER SHIP PEBBLE WITH FRELL YOU WON'T STOP ME THANKS BYE.

The Cynical Saintess's Guide to Fabricating Heroes

Chapter:27

Sep 29, 2026

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW hugging the evil away.....

The Cynical Saintess's Guide to Fabricating Heroes

Chapter:26

Sep 29, 2026

What a hell of a chapter.
The only thing I like less in it is Frell telling his evil form is due to the 3rd stone when Oebble literally barely grabbed/dropped the 2nd from the ground. And even more the dact that none of them reacted to this fact, which if they did could've made it ok and hence make it more an intentional twist rather than bc running out of time 🧿
Else I loved the meal time, idk there was an atmosphere to it. Ans Frell transformation!!! Iridescent wings PLEEEEEEAASSSSEEEE RAAAAHHHWWRRR. EPIC BATTLE HERE WE GO. NIOMFUL CHAPTER 🎇🗡️🪡🎇

The Cynical Saintess's Guide to Fabricating Heroes

Chapter:25

Sep 29, 2026

To:lolitroy

Proof that the author is possessed when writing. Plottwist, true author is da demon king

The Cynical Saintess's Guide to Fabricating Heroes

Chapter:23

Sep 29, 2026

Frell. Frell, my boy. I swear, beware. If you try anything stupid and get killed I'll find you in the afterworld and kill you a second time. PEBBLE DO SOMETHING GDI

The Cynical Saintess's Guide to Fabricating Heroes

Chapter:24

Sep 29, 2026

I love the fact that's it's the second chaoter where Pebble and Topaz are battling in the background with milkshakes and straws 🤣 best part of the chapter uwu

The Cynical Saintess's Guide to Fabricating Heroes

Chapter:23

Sep 29, 2026

I like how you weaponise hatred and its bad effects.
While the Alpherson's lore is thickening, Frell is becoming more and more obviously 'someone who needs to be fixed' too. I swear they're a therapy group before a world-saving-adventurers' one

The Cynical Saintess's Guide to Fabricating Heroes

Chapter:22

Sep 28, 2026

Not... Not joining again..? Are we really gonna lose the only nice nice man in the party 😭
You did a great work here with tension by the way, with this weird 4 y.o. girl is maid thingie and else I couldn't help but fear moar and moar about what He hid. *Hugs Alpherson for the hell time he might have with his wife*
I like that undirectly teased Alpherson's secret about dark dark self-helps books wroiting. After all, he basically said to Topaz that he can give self-help books

The Cynical Saintess's Guide to Fabricating Heroes

Chapter:21

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