Nov 16, 2025
Ohh .... the button, it's Tomlin's 🧿🧿
Okay so finished reading! Well, that sure was original, though not really an isekai. Your prose is impressive, I would be unable to write this way
Though I'll admit this is not a story I can really appreciate. I wondered why and I reached a conclusion. This story is a tool to your prose, your characters and events occurring are just tools, marionettes. Thus I couldn't feel them lively enough, I couldn't care about them. And I can't bear it 🫠
I mean, there are rare occurrences when I appreciate the prose so much I could almost read only for it. Almost, though. I think it only works for me if I'm passionate about the theme.
As for me, prose is always a tool to the story.
*That said, wishes Lina and you to write lots of stories~*