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I usually read back as a courtesy but if you're gonna read JUST so I return the favor, heed my warning: I won't

apparently my writing style is too avant-garde for the weebs or some shit but if you ask me that's just a polite way to tell me I have terminal skill issue

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Aug 02, 2023

are these people okay

YADA

Chapter:2

Aug 02, 2023

I thought she'd only say no >:'v false advertising

YADA

Chapter:1

Aug 02, 2023

To:Ryuno

understandable :P stream of consciousness is stuff I like reading so I'm be glad to stay with this to the end
best of luck!

The Longing of Shiina Ryo

Chapter:3

Aug 02, 2023

To:Ryuno

okok, that helps

The Longing of Shiina Ryo

Chapter:5

Aug 02, 2023

it was a bit hard to know who was saying what because of the lack of dialogue tags, the way they're always separate from a paragraph and, frankly, both characters speaking pretty similarly
else I feel like I would've enjoyed this chapter more since it's the first time they actually talk :'D

Be Yourself, Ayane-chan!

Chapter:9

Aug 02, 2023

THE HOST CLUB HELP
I'm surprised his body can keep up with people's thoughts
I guess telepathy also gave him super reflexes or smth (saying this even though he claims to get tired. It's one thing to know ur about to get decapitated by a soccer ball and another one to be able to dodge in time...)

it's kind of tragic to see him failing to really impress anyone, though :'D chess would probably be his best bet if he wants to cheat his way to the top like a nepotism child

Speak Your Mind!

Chapter:4

Aug 02, 2023

ah yes, the seemingly perfect girl is actually an asshole, who would've guessed

Speak Your Mind!

Chapter:3

Aug 01, 2023

is this gonna be one of those stories with a ton of references without outright namedropping >-> let's see how many I can spot

The Cute Girl Sitting Behind Me in Class Proclaims Herself God

Chapter:1

Aug 01, 2023

wait, I'm confused
the 'girl' who got transferred?
is the mc a girl >->

The Longing of Shiina Ryo

Chapter:5

Aug 01, 2023

sayonara zetsubou sensei references are always a plus, though I have to question the tastes of the person running the place cuz some of the jokes are not... family friendly so to say
I will say, though, that while the writing style is charming and full of personality, it feels like I just read a chapter where literally nothing happens

if this is some stream of consciousness kind of thing then that's fine, but for a competition like this I'm not sure how well it might perform

The Longing of Shiina Ryo

Chapter:3

Aug 01, 2023

on second thought, I moreso feel like this guy just decorates reality a lot >:P

The Longing of Shiina Ryo

Chapter:2

Aug 01, 2023

I'd say 'at least this guy's life is interesting' but I feel like after a certain point he'd kind of grow numb to statistical miracles happening around him

The Longing of Shiina Ryo

Chapter:1

Aug 01, 2023

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Bonded by Music

Chapter:26

Aug 01, 2023

kitamura yu(saku)

The Cute Girl Sitting Behind Me in Class Proclaims Herself God

Chapter:0

Aug 01, 2023

oh, I was confused for a moment
should've said you split the chapters in two :'(

Some random girl wants to make me her familiar

Chapter:2

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