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I usually read back as a courtesy but if you're gonna read JUST so I return the favor, heed my warning: I won't

apparently my writing style is too avant-garde for the weebs or some shit but if you ask me that's just a polite way to tell me I have terminal skill issue

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Aug 25, 2025

To:Konstantin Tcidenkov

I would say he's horny but idk if that's a spoiler

technicolor spiral

Chapter:4

Aug 25, 2025

To:Deleted User

good tbh
have fun

technicolor spiral

Chapter:7

Aug 25, 2025

this sux

THE RETURNERS – ISEKAI RESCUE AGENCY

Chapter:2

Aug 25, 2025

wasn't first like,,,,,,,,,,,,, but I can be first COMMENT

THE RETURNERS – ISEKAI RESCUE AGENCY

Chapter:1

Aug 23, 2025

SUCKS 2 SUCK OSHA

RE:Prophecy

Chapter:1

Aug 23, 2025

FIRST
AT LAST

RE:Prophecy

Chapter:1

Aug 21, 2025

not first.... dropped....

Isekai Waiting Blues - Refusing to be Reincarnated into an Oversaturated Genre! Or, How I Learned to Stop Worrying and Love the Isekai-Industrial Complex. (Is This Title Long Enough? Shall We Make It Longer?)

Chapter:0

Aug 18, 2025

To:Konstantin Tcidenkov

I'm glad :D I hope it stays that way :'D

technicolor spiral

Chapter:1

Aug 17, 2025

dropped i wasnt first

Otherworldly Acumen: The System's Rigged Against Me!

Chapter:0

Aug 12, 2025

KUROBINI ENTRY LET'S GOOOOOOOOOO

Hearts & Daggers

Chapter:0

Aug 11, 2025

I took a piss while reading this chapter

Piracy In Another World: I Will Plunder The System

Chapter:16

Aug 10, 2025

To:Himicchi

ok good, undropped

Fairy Life in the Second World

Chapter:5

Aug 10, 2025

To:Himicchi

a scratchy, rusty noise, "Dialogue" makes no sense

"Noo," I farted.

Fairy Life in the Second World

Chapter:3

Aug 10, 2025

ok fucking dropped I take back all my praise
if they're in another place/time in the universe the big dipper would NOT BE THE BIG DIPPER BECAUSE THE POSITIONS OF THE STARS WOULD BE DIFFERENT RELATIVE TO THE OBSERVER but if this is subtle foreshadowing you can tell me so i undrop

Fairy Life in the Second World

Chapter:5

Aug 10, 2025

So far, this is easily one of the best written works in the competition imo but that's both a good and a bad thing. The first chapter was great and hooked me, but that's because of the kinds of books I like to read... which are usually not light novels. The last two chapters seem almost Capote-adjacent (I want to read/cry A Christmas Memory now) but they make me wonder if the elaborate (without being loquacious) prose and concept are what a weeb writing contest is looking for. We got writers like Kaisei with fantastic prose, but she has yet to win anything despite being a finalist twice...

Moreover, while I'm a big fan of the writing, it does seem to move at a glacial pace, not just for LNs but in general. The last two chapters feel like they could've been the same, bjt my guess is the cringe 1.5k soft limit was to blame.

I mentioned that it feels Capote adjacent at times, and I feel like that's because of how detached the protagonist seems. She's moreso a vehicle to the story rather than her own person, though she showed a ton of personality in Chapter 1. Case in point, Breakfast at Tiffany's MC doesn't even have a name. Hana does, but so does Fred (in the movie, and even that isn't actually his name).

If this is your intention, that's fine. The world and writing are goof enough that I don't mind the slow pace or window protagonist. Just pointing that out.

Fairy Life in the Second World

Chapter:4

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