Apr 25, 2025
ykno,,, im a big fan of you and nakano because of the... unconventional nature of your works let's say, but in this instance I do have to wonder if the lack of direction is what caused your writer's block. Usually I think you'd be done by this point in the competition, but this doesn't seem close to done yet. Even though there was a lot of goofy silliness to your entries in 2023 and 2024, they did have a clear direction. It's weird because this prompt, by definition, gives us an endpoint, but at this time I couldn’t tell you how their girlfailure shenanigans serve a purpose beyond comedy, I don't know.
With that said, this one is BY FAR the funniest. I had my laughs with food trucks and the anti harem entry, but I legitimately cannot read this at work 
or maybe I just like puns idk
