May 12, 2025
I would call it "cute" so far, but it's also surprisingly morbid, and I don't mean the body horror, but the whole humsn eating and whatnot. I'm still a bit confused by what happened on the first chapter and what the narrative purpose was tbh
So far the world is shaping up to be pretty interesting, and I'm looking forward to see what Uatchita and Miriyam might be up to. However with how situational the overall morality seems to be, I'm left wondering if Uatchita will be fine with killing monsters even though she has monster friends. Are all monsters sentient or just the higher level ones? How does the sun reach below the dungeon? I'm looking forward to see how these things fit into the world.
Also, if Uatchita is just able to leave the dungeon and walk in the human world so to say, I'm left wondering if this is a common thing? Are monsters with human bodies common? Is the monsterization spell commonly known or does the general public take her for a dungeon creature, and if so, why? Also, why is she having nightmares about killing people if she stabbed someone's chest with a glass bottle?
idk, looking forward to getting more answers in general.
I'll probably trim most of the loloposting during rewrites, so thank you for pointing out specifics, and honestly, I would agree that the prose is better this time around, even if both were first drafts that imploded near the end due to skill issue 
surely he's not a narrative device is he... surely...