Sep 07, 2023
It took me a moment, but here we are at the end of The Greatest Comeback. Congratulations on completing your story, Shulox 👏 Just want to say to start that the final line was perfect, gave me a good chuckle 😆⚽️ I’ve said it before, but I was pretty surprised when this one took a supernatural twist after the tournament 🏟️ had you always intended on going that direction with the story, or was it something you decided to do around that juncture? Either way, I felt like you executed it pretty well. It did get a *little* confusing at times with the time continuum and events surrounding the crash (but that’s not uncommon in a story with time loops) 🕰️ on the romance portion you certainly delivered one of the most heartfelt bonds of the contest. I won’t soon forget Takashi and Nao’s love and how (with a certain fox’s help 🦊) they were able to preserve it. Thanks for writing, my friend and best of luck in the contest!
