Aug 13, 2023
To:minatika
That is one of the biggest struggles as an author, Showing vs. Telling. I do think you were able to strike a nice balance though. As much as I would love real-life magic, the amount of ways it could be misused is tremendous 😅 very Madoka-esque. I don’t blame you for the blurring of Charles and Cedrick 😂 they’re both blonde, they’re both schemers, they both hold high positions, and they both have C names. I understand, completely. ❣️ Also I did start another novel! If you do end up checking it out when time allows, I think Summer Rain is a little more adult-catered. It’s my first swing at non-isekai. ✍️
