Oct 09, 2023
Iāve enjoyed the twists in these stories in the final couple paragraphs, including the one you alluded to here with the ākidnappingā (I put it in quotes because Iām half certain that itās metaphorical, but I have a walnut brain when it comes to figuring out hidden meanings. š) I sort of understood what you were going for. āDeathā here is the shedding of their old selves, and starting fresh elsewhere. I think the meaning conveyed well enough.