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Taylor J

Hello! My name is Taylor! I am a writer and artist. One day I want to work in the video game and light novel industry and make epic stories for all of you to enjoy!

My aim is to improve a little bit every day, so please feel free to critique my work as much as you’d like! (I can take it)
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Current Novels :
1. The Pill That Killed Romance (hiatus until after MALxHF)
2. Face of Eternity : The Journey of a Little Angel
3. Control My Life!

Upcoming Novels :

1. Apocalypse Punk Pt. 2

registered at: Feb 05, 2023

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May 02, 2025

"Stalkuta" 😭

Sakuta jumping in to help the princess out with the count was pretty cool of him. That guy definitely needed to see what a real man would do in that situation.

Hime-sama: Courting the Crown Princess in Another World

Chapter:3

May 02, 2025

You might have mentioned this in a comment, but this reminds me of that one old cartoon with all the cartoon characters racing. Wacky Races, was it? I used to like the mafia guys from that 😂

Limitless Vlogging: A journey around the utopian supercontinent

Chapter:25

May 02, 2025

To:Han Quixote

All good! I appreciate the consideration!👍

Face of Eternity : The Journey of a Little Angel

Chapter:5

May 02, 2025

To:Han Quixote

You’re correct about the exposition summary! I try to do that in places where I think that the story would get too slowed down if the characters just sat there and discussed it for a while. I feel it helps with the flow a little and keeps things moving, so I’m glad you appreciate it. And like you mentioned, Yalda just kinda’ glosses over it in her mind 😂

In more lighthearted/action stories I write, I tend to do the *SOUND* thing, since I think it adds a little action to the page. I’ve also gotten good feedback from people on it before, so I pepper these in when I think it works.

I’ve been a little worried that the threat of low mana affliction wouldn’t come off as serious enough to the audience by this chapter, so I’m glad you pointed that out here as a real threat. I never thought of it like Dark Souls, but that’s absolutely on point! Later on, this comparison actually fits even better, but I won’t spoil that part.

(Dark Souls IV : A Little Angel in Hell) 👼

I won’t spoil anything about what Grandpa Goblin was talking about, but keep making theories! I like to know what you're thinking with that.

As for the Three Laws of Robotics, wait till you hear what her father’s full name is lol

I’m glad the Talking Tree brought the whole chapter together! Your feedback with that is actually big, because now I kinda’ know what direction I’m taking new chapters going forward. THANK YOU!

The Ancient Dragon! This song just unlocked a lot of memories in my head of boss fights and memes lol 🐉

As always, thanks for reading and commenting, Han! (Glad you spotted another Minecraft reference lol)

Face of Eternity : The Journey of a Little Angel

Chapter:5

Apr 30, 2025

An epic battle and they managed to get the Sirens to leave! It's good to know that most of the Sirens are co-operating, especially since there's a high likelihood they can come back to their home later.

I like how she's all worried about James and getting to see him on his day off lol I'm assuming his story with the journal already happened by this point?

Small typo, but when Hazel is addressing the sirens as their new temporary leader, she says "Hear me know" instead of "Hear me now!"

Rescuing the Ocean's songs

Chapter:2

Apr 30, 2025

I echo Kaze's thoughts. I think Avery needed to vent and will likely forgive Dorian in time. But right now tensions are high, and they're both under a lot of stress, so they'll need time to cool before logically bringing this back up again, I think.

An Ode to the Stars

Chapter:18

Apr 30, 2025

To:Animal508

The pumpkin's cooking up a devious plan🎃

Saratoga: In Search of the Healing Tears

Chapter:14

Apr 30, 2025

To:Hallowfear

Hello, Hallowfear! Yes, this story is written to be a comedy

My Personal Warrior

Chapter:1

Apr 29, 2025

To:Mario Nakano 64

You are correct! Perhaps you're more right than you know 👀

My Personal Warrior

Chapter:11

Apr 29, 2025

To:Sammi9519

June's always looking out for Auri! And keeping the bad guys under her thumb!👍

My Personal Warrior

Chapter:11

Apr 29, 2025

To:SkeletonIdiot

RIP Octo's freedom 😔

My Personal Warrior

Chapter:10

Apr 28, 2025

Asami brings up a really interesting, but tragic point of view when she says that others wouldn't interpret Sayuri's actions as heroic. I never even really considered that, but it shows how low her self image is, considering what she's gone through.

I totally support Sayuri's decisions all the way though, because Asami needs someone like that around. I'm glad Asami's attempts to sabotage their early relationship didn't work, which kinda' says A LOT about Sayuri too lol

Cat Got My Tongue

Chapter:2

Apr 28, 2025

To:Han Quixote

As always, feel free to make comments however you'd like! They're always good to read!

The Banana/Manona crest thing is probably one of my favourite early jokes in the series. Ever since my first draft of the story that one has been in there. Like you mentioned, it was a cute way to add in some exposition. 🍌

You are correct that its an inside out Earth! Their planet does have a proper surface as well, as Yalda will bring up too. The Gundam space colony is one of the inspirations for this actually, since I remember seeing pictures of it all over when doing research.

Just looked up "The Girl on a Space Colony" and I absolutely love it now!🎵

FLINT AND STEEL!

Thanks for pointing out the Paradina typo! Also, as far as the "Kinda'" apostrophe goes, I've actually been a bit inconsistent with that. In recent times I've actually been keeping the apostrophe off, since my writing program does apparently recognize it as a proper word now (I think?). But I usually try to add it there anyways. I would say add it in though, just to be safe.

Also, glad your learning new vocab! And I'm glad you enjoy the world building! I love crafting this world and adding details to it all the time. 🌎🧱👷‍♂️

Once again, thank you for the comment and continued reading, Han!👍

Face of Eternity : The Journey of a Little Angel

Chapter:4

Apr 28, 2025

To:Mario Nakano 64

Yep! I figured it was time to bring it back home a bit 📝✍️

My Personal Warrior

Chapter:10

Apr 27, 2025

To:Orionless

You flatter me, my friend!

My Personal Warrior

Chapter:10

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