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Taylor J

Hello! My name is Taylor! I am a writer and artist. One day I want to work in the video game and light novel industry and make epic stories for all of you to enjoy!

My aim is to improve a little bit every day, so please feel free to critique my work as much as you’d like! (I can take it)
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Books In Progress:
1. Face of Eternity : The Journey of a Little Angel

Coming up next:
1. The Pill That Killed Romance (Vol. 3)

registered at: Feb 05, 2023

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Apr 25, 2025

To:Han Quixote

When I originally wrote this, I didn't plan to post it on Honeyfeed, so I thought it was funny that the bee theme just happened to fit in 😂🐝

The kit bash feel is definitely justified, since I pretty much put in what I want depending on if I think it serves the story in a good way. The trick is to flesh out the details as the things go on and cement it all as a part of the world. So as far as the periodic table and other chemistry/science related themes, expect a bunch more in the near future! ⚗️🧪

You may find a few more Video game references as the story goes on😉 Some are more obvious than others.

I'm actually surprised and flattered you enjoy the details! I always thought that I should probably be more descriptive, since a bunch of web novels I've read spend entire paragraphs on one object in a room alone (Or as you said, can just breeze over stuff way too quickly). My thing about details like that is that I like to describe items that are unique to their world or not common in our real world. But I totally agree that those details help the reader feel like their more in the moment and give them time to process things!

There'll be a little more on mana in the next few chapters, but I think you bring up a good question in regards to the mechanics behind the relationship of food and mana. I do have an explanation for it, but I'll see if the next few chapters answer your question. I'll make a note of that! 🍎

Oh and overpowered MC FTW! 😎

Once again, thank you for continuing to read, Han! 👍

Face of Eternity : The Journey of a Little Angel

Chapter:3

Apr 25, 2025

To:Sammi9519

Hey Sammi! Welcome to FOE! The recurring joke that Yalda has trouble with words probably comes from my sleep deprivation as well

I'm so glad your checking out FOE! Just a heads up, I have done renovations and am posting a more modern version of the story that will encompass this and all the others I've made. You can keep reading here if you'd like (which I don't mind!), but just wanted to let you know that there's a rewritten version available! 👍

Face of Eternity : The Little Angel

Chapter:1

Apr 24, 2025

Nooo! Not MANUAL LABOR!!! 😭😭😭

(Didn't know you had a cold! Hope you're feeling better dude!)

Sucky Apocalypse

Chapter:9

Apr 24, 2025

Man... Gargan is a total jerk... What a terrible father!!! 😡

The World Doesn't Change So Easily

Chapter:6

Apr 23, 2025

Dude, this is killing it! I love the yakuza theme going on, and it feels like its going to be a great action drama. Very excited to see how it ties in Grace too!

Grace Moves Mountains

Chapter:0

Apr 23, 2025

Oooh! Were back to it! The hunters are on the case to figure out the deal with these man eating sirens! I'm glad that they're trying to make an effort to compromise, but I have a feeling it won't be easy here, especially since Hazel has experience with their species.

Rescuing the Ocean's songs

Chapter:1

Apr 23, 2025

To:Han Quixote

I definitely added a lot to this chapter, and there's a lot of deeper meaning that will make more of sense later on too. So process it at whatever speed is comfortable! Like I said, I enjoy your comments, and thank you for the continued reading!

Face of Eternity : The Journey of a Little Angel

Chapter:1

Apr 23, 2025

To:Han Quixote

You're comments makes me feel pure joy with how detailed they are, Han! Feel free to write them out as long as you'd like

Binary Sunset is exactly the vibe I was going for! I'm actually flattered hearing it made you think of my story.

I'm also glad you enjoyed the details around her room. I tried to give it as much personality as I could, since she would have spent a lot of time in it. I always think you can tell a lot about a person by how the decorate their room! (Mine is currently a mess while I'm moving things around 😅)

Oh, lol yes, Samael is her pet snake and not permanently attached to her head 🤣🐍

Face of Eternity : The Journey of a Little Angel

Chapter:2

Apr 23, 2025

To:Sammi9519

They should have found a better insurance plan 😭😂

My Personal Warrior

Chapter:8

Apr 23, 2025

To:SkeletonIdiot

Lime is the best! 🍋(This emoji isn't a lime, but it was the closest thing they had)😆

My Personal Warrior

Chapter:8

Apr 22, 2025

To:Sammi9519

I've been meaning to check your new story out! Definitely will get to it soon

Thorns in Paradise

Chapter:30

Apr 22, 2025

To:Han Quixote

Hello Han! Welcome to eternity! 👋 Seriously, thank you for this feedback! It's very encouraging and you've given me a lot to think about and improve!

You are correct in your theory that they are on a higher plane! There's a lot more spiritual connotation there then literal because of that, which might cause some of the confusion. I'll do a few edits to clarify some things about that and what it all means, since I kinda' was wondering myself if things were clear enough. Your feedback has given me a little more direction!

I'll also get to fixing the inconsistency and the grammar typos you pointed out! (I don't know how those got past me reading through this a hundred times😅)

I'm very glad you enjoyed it though! Thank you for checking it out and leaving great feedback! Like I said, it's very encouraging

Face of Eternity : The Journey of a Little Angel

Chapter:1

Apr 22, 2025

Aww, what a happy ending! I can't believe its over, and it was such a fun ride! I'm so glad Lizzy and Alex got together, and my goodness, they had more kids then my art teacher in elementary school! (Who kinda' looked like Taylor swift now that I'm thinking about it...) 😂

As for the characters: Following Lizzy and Stacy as the main duo was great. I felt like they both built off each other very well and it was very clear that they were close friends. They overcame a lot, and it was great to see them both break out of their shells, especially Lizzy, since she needed more confidence.

Karen and Alex were also great characters too. Karen and all her sass, and Alex always inching his way out of his fear of dating someone younger. His grandparents did a great job pushing him out of that lol. I think it was interesting how both he and Lizzy were so shy and needed to be pushed.

As for the setting: I think you did a great job exploring a farm setting in a way that was understandable! I've never worked a farm, but I have lived by dozens, have watched anime and TV shows on them, and have walked a few on field trips. So it was fun to see one here!

As for the story: Going into a better future to escape the dying past is really interesting! I'd say the story was largely character driven, since there wasn't a major goal pressuring the plot forward outside of Lizzy and Alex getting together by the end. So we really got to see a lot of everyone and learn so much about them!

Overall, I thought this story was a lot of fun and enjoyed it a lot! Thanks for writing it, Sammi!!!

Thorns in Paradise

Chapter:30

Apr 22, 2025

Those letters from Lizzy's parents were so sweet! 😭😭😭

Thorns in Paradise

Chapter:29

Apr 22, 2025

To:Orionless

Thankfully, out of all the things I've ever written based on my experiences, that's never happened to me lol. (The taxi guy however...) I did take a muffin to the face when I sat in the back of the bus one time, which was really gross, but the guy who threw it felt bad and said I could throw it back if I wanted. (I did not XD)

My Personal Warrior

Chapter:8