Taylor J

Taylor J

Hello! My name is Taylor! I am a writer and artist. One day I want to work in the video game and light novel industry and make epic stories for all of you to enjoy!

My aim is to improve a little bit every day, so please feel free to critique my work as much as you’d like! (I can take it)
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Current Novels :
1. The Pill That Killed Romance (hiatus until after MALxHF)
2. Face of Eternity : The Journey of a Little Angel
3. My Personal Warrior

Upcoming Novels :
1. Apocalypse Punk Pt. 2

registered at: Feb 05, 2023
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    Participant - MAL x Honeyfeed Writing Contest 2023








    Feb 11, 2024

    What a cute ending for them! Hopefully Rina dosn’t end up as crazy about challenges as her mother, but who knows, since one of her first words were MILF :honey_lol:

    I really enjoyed this story! It had a lot of very cute moments and even some useful info too about the streaming world. I don't keep up with a whole lot of streamers anymore since most of my freetime is dedicated to writing, (and video games :honey_dealwithit: ) but it's inspiring to see that such a world is more alive then ever, and people are having fun with it even reading about it.

    As for the setting: it was pretty simple and effective, since most of it took place in the apartment, but it was the games and challenges that really transported us to different places. It was especially fun if I recognized the game that was referenced too.

    As for the plot: it had me on the edge of my seat a few times! Who would be shaving their head? What would be the next challenge? Very interesting. I think my only criticism is that (and I think you pointed this out too in a comment) Leona's dad didn't really get a more major arc, but that's okay since things worked out in the end. Plus the stories were kinda restricted by the HF contest, so only so much can happen.

    And as for the characters: all of them were fun! I really liked the dad and grandfather, but the mothers redemption arc was really impressive.

    So overall, it was a fun read! I'm glad I finally got through it! Although the journey is more important then the destination :bee_yay:

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