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I thought what I'd do was, I'd pretend I was one of those Slowpoke

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May 23, 2023

- "What’s so special about the soapmakers?"
"Well, obviously it’s not meant to be taken literally; it refers to any manufacturers of beauty products."

His Soul is Marching On to Another World; or, the John Brown Isekai (Fall of the Slave Harem)

Chapter:10

May 22, 2023

Going by the titles, one more interlude/exposition chapter to go before the main story continues.
I do like the slow buildup in this version. I did enjoy the self contained shortstories too, but I like how this version takes its time to flesh out things.

His Soul is Marching On to Another World; or, the John Brown Isekai (Fall of the Slave Harem)

Chapter:7

May 20, 2023

I do like how you gave Ayomide a more active role in gaining her freedom and even helping out Brown towards the end in this novel. 👍

His Soul is Marching On to Another World; or, the John Brown Isekai (Fall of the Slave Harem)

Chapter:5

May 19, 2023

What do you call a german bear that has been hit by a lot of soap?
Sauber.

(Sauber = Clean ; Bär/Baer = Bear)

His Soul is Marching On to Another World; or, the John Brown Isekai (Fall of the Slave Harem)

Chapter:3

May 18, 2023

So you are using another main character from your old story.
Getting some Fight Club vibes from the (what I assume to be) soap making.
Is he going to blow something up too?

His Soul is Marching On to Another World; or, the John Brown Isekai (Fall of the Slave Harem)

Chapter:2

May 18, 2023

Solid conclusion. Good job.

Guess I'll continue with the ongoing main novel later on, and recommend these 2 short novels to some people in the meantime.

His Soul is Marching On to Another World; or, the John Brown Isekai (End of the Slave Empire)

Chapter:6

May 18, 2023

'So the Lord said: “Go down, John Brown Way down in Fahre's land. Tell old Baron. Let my people go.”'

Missed opportunity, just saying'.

His Soul is Marching On to Another World; or, the John Brown Isekai (End of the Slave Empire)

Chapter:3

May 18, 2023

Not pulling any punches in this story.
An insurrection it is.

His Soul is Marching On to Another World; or, the John Brown Isekai (End of the Slave Empire)

Chapter:2

May 18, 2023

Glad the he made it through.

A very good reading experience overall.

A bit less comedy than I had expected from the premise, but I don't mean that in a negative way.

Guess I'll check out the other standalone novel next and then continue with the main novel later on.

His Soul is Marching On to Another World; or, the John Brown Isekai (Total Nekonomic Collapse)

Chapter:6

May 17, 2023

When you say this story is independent, does that mean the 3 only share the main character in different non overlapping settings/timelines, or are the other 2 taking part later on in this setting/timeline and reading them first would spoil part of this story?

(Just trying to figure out, if I should continue reading this story first, or check out the other 2, before picking this up again, since they are already finished.)

His Soul is Marching On to Another World; or, the John Brown Isekai (Fall of the Slave Harem)

Chapter:1

May 17, 2023

Good premise, and great execution! (pun intended)
Was not expecting the tone shift to happen so suddenly, after reading the first couple of paragraphs.

His Soul is Marching On to Another World; or, the John Brown Isekai (Fall of the Slave Harem)

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