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Sep 16, 2023

This is getting funnier and weirder by the chapter, which is quite an accomplishment given how ridiculous it started.

YADA

Chapter:7

Sep 15, 2023

I wonder how reverse psychology would work on her...

YADA

Chapter:3

Sep 15, 2023

Gummigator 2: Lawncare Day

YADA

Chapter:2

Sep 15, 2023

Quite the unique story approach, but hey it is working great!

I thought I might be put off by the first person present, but you manage to pull it off fine.

YADA

Chapter:1

Aug 30, 2023

Glad everyting worked out thanks to Keiths last minute effort and Sean getting scouted.

Congratz on finishing.

Would You Paint My Dunk

Chapter:46

Aug 29, 2023

Quite the close call.
And speaking of close calls, the contest will end in two days...

Would You Paint My Dunk

Chapter:45

Aug 28, 2023

So with Ryan burning all bridges, is Keith now semi-permanently one of the 6 players in group 2?

Would You Paint My Dunk

Chapter:44

Aug 28, 2023

So you ended it with chapters cut out?
Gotta agree with the others, this felt a bit rushed.
You still handled it better than my original last chapter.

Anyway, congratz on finishing for now!

The Nerd's Love for the Popular Girl's Secret Indie Band

Chapter:17

Aug 27, 2023

Finally Keith scored in an official match.
Hope that his stamina lasts if he is switched in again.

Would You Paint My Dunk

Chapter:43

Aug 26, 2023

A date it is!

The Nerd's Love for the Popular Girl's Secret Indie Band

Chapter:16

Aug 26, 2023

Keith used Substitute.
It's super effective!

Would You Paint My Dunk

Chapter:42

Aug 25, 2023

Poor Sean. The opposite of plot armor hit him.
So next match is Keith's turn to be switched in for a moment...

Would You Paint My Dunk

Chapter:41

Aug 24, 2023

Nice recording session, too bad they noticed the red light, or Masaki could have secretly listened in a bit.

The Nerd's Love for the Popular Girl's Secret Indie Band

Chapter:15

Aug 23, 2023

Congratulations on finishing your first work here, that alone is an achievement quite some of the other contest participants didn't get too.

Hope you can improve on some of the areas that are still lacking skills in and maybe find a good editor.

Love in Real Life Game

Chapter:23

Aug 23, 2023

Some of the usual issues with some of the dialogs, but all in all a nice way to wrap it up where it started, even if it is just a temporary endpoint.
Some proper editing and some changes to the dialog here and there would likely help to keep readers engaged.

Love in Real Life Game

Chapter:22

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