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Apr 06, 2024

I am disturbed, and yet intrigued.
Also, if they both turned into magical girls, wouldn't it technically still be gay?
I think that's technically correct... you know, the best type of correct.

Panacea

Chapter:1

Dec 31, 2023

Pretty solid work and pretty detailed about the environments. There were 2-3 name drops about spirits and that organisation, I assume those would be related to the first work, but I think it works fine. If the reader doesn't know the other content, he will have some questions, but that might be a good thing (building mystery) if you do explain those later on a bit.

Tetraprisma: Backtrack

Chapter:1

Nov 20, 2023

To:Valentine

Do whatever works best for you.
My story is currently back on the outlining step and it will undergo a complete rewrite, but I want to write 1 or maybe 2 shorter stories first. There were a lot of both small and big issues I'd like to fix, so if you have some notes, please do share them with me once you are done.

Nymphaea: A Tale of Flowers

Chapter:19

Nov 20, 2023

To:Valentine

Sorry, its been a while, if it was a comment related to this chapter I might have misread the log event and the one before where something almost falls and is caught with magic. If it was a comment based on a previous chapter... then I don't really remember.

Nymphaea: A Tale of Flowers

Chapter:12

Oct 20, 2023

To:Funsui

Hope you get it done in time.
But yeah, it doesn't really matter if it's during or after the contest if you like the idea.

The Girl of Death

Chapter:1

Oct 20, 2023

But seriously, great use of perspective and point of view throughout the whole thing and especially the jump.

Sisi

Chapter:1

Oct 20, 2023

Hands down best comedy since romeo and juliet.
(That I've read so far.)
((Sample size 2.))

Sisi

Chapter:1

Oct 20, 2023

This hits different.
First entry I read that dealt with the fallout/aftermath.

You're Not Going To Read This Anyway

Chapter:1

Oct 20, 2023

This felt more like a Comedy during the middle part, nice job!

A Fleeting Soul

Chapter:1

Oct 20, 2023

Enjoyed the slow progress towards the final reveal, I guess it would have been more of a twist if one didn't know about the source material.

Notes from AKIRA-CHAN

Chapter:1

Oct 20, 2023

Ha, this time you didn't catch me off guard!

Overall a nice origin story, and a good tie of the end back to the joke in the middle.

The Girl of Death

Chapter:1

Oct 19, 2023

Great story, getting some serious Re:Zero vibes.

And that word count... *chef's kisses* (jk)

The Endless Night

Chapter:1

Oct 19, 2023

To:Saika

You already read my entry for the YOASOBIxHF contest.

You can see all of the novels of an author by clicking on their name or icon. (This will take you to their user page. There you can also see the Gallery and Comments.)

The 'Check my novel' button takes you to a novel selected by the author, or the novel with the latest update. (not 100% sure on this)

The Isekai you bookmarked was my entry for the MALxHF contest.

How I Became a Thanatos

Chapter:1

Oct 19, 2023

To:Saika

Your entry is likely more aligned with the contest's prompt/idea/purpose then mine.

Judging from your comment feed, you should have a better idea if the other contestants used similar ideas or not, as you have read a lot more entries by now.

How I Became a Thanatos

Chapter:1

Oct 19, 2023

Interesting take, quite chilling.
This take is likely the closest a spinoff could have been to the original without rewriting it from the original POV.

How I Became a Thanatos

Chapter:1

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