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Apr 13, 2024

From the title, I wasn't sure if this would be lighthearted reference, or if a part of the station would loose atmosphere and kill Yasu in the process.
Glad it was more of the former and a nice setup for the next chapter.

The Hoshinauts

Chapter:5

Apr 13, 2024

I don't think reality ever stopped anyone from shipping anything irl.

The Hoshinauts

Chapter:3

Apr 12, 2024

Cards in Space.

The Hoshinauts

Chapter:2

Apr 12, 2024

Nice Sailor Moon reference you got there.
Also a good idea to send girls into space, less payload and all, too bad those damn real world ethics committees would be a pain if one would even dare to make the suggestion.

The Hoshinauts

Chapter:1

Apr 11, 2024

Well, you nailed that wordcount.

the color of shattered dreams

Chapter:6

Apr 11, 2024

To:lolitroy

I meant if you intend to make the members of the magic academy 'club' the magical girl to death and call it mission accomplished.

verb: club; 3rd person present: clubs; past tense: clubbed; past participle: clubbed; gerund or present participle: clubbing

beat (a person or animal) with a club or similar implement.
"the islanders clubbed whales to death"

the color of shattered dreams

Chapter:5

Apr 11, 2024

Okay, we are 5 chapters in.
Is this supposed to end up as a 'seal walks into a club' kinda thingy, or have you given up all pretenses to follow the theme?

the color of shattered dreams

Chapter:5

Apr 11, 2024

Chapter 3... in which lolo realizes that this month's theme had actually been 'Magic Academy Clubs' instead of "Magical Girl", and tries to salvage the plot by faking a moonlanding.

the color of shattered dreams

Chapter:3

Apr 11, 2024

11/10 for the chapter title alone.

the color of shattered dreams

Chapter:1

Dec 31, 2023

Pretty solid work and pretty detailed about the environments. There were 2-3 name drops about spirits and that organisation, I assume those would be related to the first work, but I think it works fine. If the reader doesn't know the other content, he will have some questions, but that might be a good thing (building mystery) if you do explain those later on a bit.

Tetraprisma: Backtrack

Chapter:1

Nov 20, 2023

To:Valentine

Do whatever works best for you.
My story is currently back on the outlining step and it will undergo a complete rewrite, but I want to write 1 or maybe 2 shorter stories first. There were a lot of both small and big issues I'd like to fix, so if you have some notes, please do share them with me once you are done.

Nymphaea: A Tale of Flowers

Chapter:19

Nov 20, 2023

To:Valentine

Sorry, its been a while, if it was a comment related to this chapter I might have misread the log event and the one before where something almost falls and is caught with magic. If it was a comment based on a previous chapter... then I don't really remember.

Nymphaea: A Tale of Flowers

Chapter:12

Oct 20, 2023

To:Funsui

Hope you get it done in time.
But yeah, it doesn't really matter if it's during or after the contest if you like the idea.

The Girl of Death

Chapter:1

Oct 20, 2023

This hits different.
First entry I read that dealt with the fallout/aftermath.

You're Not Going To Read This Anyway

Chapter:1

Oct 20, 2023

This felt more like a Comedy during the middle part, nice job!

A Fleeting Soul

Chapter:1

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