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Aug 29, 2023
Quite the close call. And speaking of close calls, the contest will end in two days...
Aug 28, 2023
So with Ryan burning all bridges, is Keith now semi-permanently one of the 6 players in group 2?
So you ended it with chapters cut out? Gotta agree with the others, this felt a bit rushed. You still handled it better than my original last chapter.
Anyway, congratz on finishing for now!
Aug 27, 2023
Finally Keith scored in an official match. Hope that his stamina lasts if he is switched in again.
Aug 26, 2023
A date it is!
Keith used Substitute. It's super effective!
Aug 25, 2023
Poor Sean. The opposite of plot armor hit him. So next match is Keith's turn to be switched in for a moment...
Aug 24, 2023
Nice recording session, too bad they noticed the red light, or Masaki could have secretly listened in a bit.
Aug 23, 2023
Congratulations on finishing your first work here, that alone is an achievement quite some of the other contest participants didn't get too.
Hope you can improve on some of the areas that are still lacking skills in and maybe find a good editor.
Some of the usual issues with some of the dialogs, but all in all a nice way to wrap it up where it started, even if it is just a temporary endpoint. Some proper editing and some changes to the dialog here and there would likely help to keep readers engaged.
Well, looks like Carlos earned his long awaited introduction fair and square.
Aug 21, 2023
Their company is definitley sus.
Delightfully devilish Jessica.
Aug 20, 2023
Seems Masaki dropped the ball here, should have at least asked her about the lyrics...
Okay, than good luck with your revisions. I'll just check for revised chapters every once in a while. Maybe I won't catch them on the day you edit, but if there are a couple done, I might just binge a bit.
