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Jun 08, 2023
Did I miss it, or do you explain if the devil's brand is a tatoo, or a 'real' brnad?
Also, good choice starting with the action and keep the exposition for this second chapter.
Jun 07, 2023
It is a very good start. I don't think you should worry about the comparison you mentioned, your story is unique and if it continues like this, will be able to find its own readership.
You know the old saying, "If life gives you 'tatoes, make fries"? And if you can't make fire, just get roasted by the closest love interest.
To:Harmonica Writes
Wasn't that the name of the item used to summon a monster in RO?
Reminds me of the time the profanity filter censored the ass in Nasser.
I see, guess the programmers were on crunch time and had to work on a strict budget. Plausibilitys restored.
All of the 'yan', none of the 'dere'... I think this lucid dream is broken.
To:Lihinel
Sorry, was just channeling my inner Joe Rogan after all those other memes, I just couldn't resist.
That's crazy, man... Have you ever done DMT?
Jun 06, 2023
Quote: "NO!" Ah, yes, denial, the first stage of romance. Get a bush.
So there are Dead Branches in AO too?
Love your characters IGNs. Very authentic. The only thing missing is an elf going by 'xXx Legolas xXx', or maybe there was one before and they just took him out at spawn...
I was hesitant to read present day entries, more of an isekai guy, but this one is quite nice. That Covid reference though... literal toilet humor.
Man, the physics engine must suck a** if the viscosity of lava is similar to water. The chair glitch is relatable though. Happens to the best of us.
Nice dynamic you've got going between the two!