Apr 12, 2024
To:Bubbles
I decided to keep the first two old episodes of chapter 1 and cut back on a lot of the new summary esque intro I added some days ago.
There is very little focus on the narrator in all but the first and the last chapter anyway. Some of that was on purpose.
Maybe this should have been written in third person, or maybe my focus on the club(members) instead of the pov character was a mistake, but I don't feel like throwing out all chapters and rewritting it as something that it wasn't meant to be.
Maybe I'll add some more flavor to the narration through the pov character later on, once I've gottten some mental distance from the story, but for now I wanted this last chapter out and be done with it.
![[Twilight-07]](https://honeyfeed-novel-images.s3.amazonaws.com/uploads/novel_image/file/13807/cover_thumb_262befc4-e2e4-431f-a1d6-1be024c6f4e7.jpeg)