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LisaLisa

Doctor in Computer Engineering based in Spain with a passion for writing.

I'm also a mother now so my time for leaving comments is limited :') So I will just drop as many likes as I can if I like a novel xDDD

You can check my other stories (fics) here: https://archiveofourown.org/users/Lisa_Lisa

registered at: May 26, 2023

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Oct 16, 2026

Ooof thank godness the grandtather intervened or Seveg/Razzel would be gone 😭
For a moment I though she was actually going to adopt Luciella but no, though after thinking about it I doubt they allowed a stranger to take her and Seveg/Razzel has enough with his journey and his own problems, not to mention he is still way too young to take such a big responsability but jeez, poor girl 🥲 At least she has her father's book...that's something 😭

Re:Incarnation • The Hundred Faces of Razzel Od Mithril

Chapter:20

Oct 15, 2026

The pups 💕💕💕
"This is a good place to put down roots" Elian and Kaia are SO married 🥰

For a more general feedback, the story felt a bit rushed with these past chapters. I have the impression that in case you had had more time, we would have been able to learn more about the dwarfs and elves, and perhaps even more about the bug people who were controlling the bugs. I was kinda expecting a big fight againts one of them.

THAT BEING SAID I really liked this story 💕💕💕 The characters are so charming and nice that I was rooting for them (I had such a soft spot for Lior even if he was missing practically from the start, and also Brinja and her scary-lovely goat), and your way of writing is so clean and detailed that it was a pleasure reading it.

Congratulations for a really wholesome epic hero entry Jen 💕💕💕 All the luck to the contest! 🍀🍀🍀

Exiled — Rekindling the Flame

Chapter:33

Oct 15, 2026

The golden duo stroke again 💕
Thank godness the Kaia managed to make Elian see that his power was worth it to use again, or otherwise things would have ended too different in this battle.
I'm so glad everyone of the main characters made it out alive 😭

Exiled — Rekindling the Flame

Chapter:32

Oct 15, 2026

WHAT THE FUCK KOVAK
I wasn't seeing that coming!! He was an asshole already but on the top of that HE did that!! Honestly the cell is a too soft punishment: I will leave him alone with a bug boss to see what happens, what a terrible man 🤬🤬 ...or perhaps alone with Blackbeard. THAT would be dangerous 🐐😈

BUT asides from that individual, I really loved the trial. Everyone who cares about Elian stepped in to help their boy: Lucen, Brinja (yeeey, she appeared again 💕) and Lioor 🥰🥰🥰 I'm so happy that Elian was finally pardoned. It was time already!

Exiled — Rekindling the Flame

Chapter:31

Oct 15, 2026

YEEEEEY they had their reunion!!!! 💕 💕 💕 💕 💕 💕
I'm so SO happy Lior was so happy to see him and that he reassured Elian so much about that happened. The part with Linnet was hard because it's never funny so see an old friend suffering BUT at least his best friend is alive and well and don't resent him at all. That finally removed that burden from Elian's shoulders 😭😭😭
Also Elian dear, just a look and Lior realized that there is clearly something between Kaia and you besides the air, amigo date cuenta xDDDD
But of course everything was going way too well and Elian had to go and be arrested...hope thay gets solved soon because I have the feeling that a bug war is finally approaching 🐛🐞🐜⚔️

Exiled — Rekindling the Flame

Chapter:30

Oct 15, 2026

AAAAAAAAAAH THAT END 😭😭💕💕
I was ready to leave a comment about the elves and them learning that maybe there is a whole continent where bugs have the upper hand but then THAT ENDING happened. I need to read the neeeext!!

Exiled — Rekindling the Flame

Chapter:29

Oct 13, 2026

Lucen is such a nice man, he was so helpful.
"Seeing her like that was worth some discomfort"💕
Time to meet the elves noow🧝‍♀️🧝‍♂️

Exiled — Rekindling the Flame

Chapter:28

Oct 07, 2026

Yeeey luck smiled at them and fortunately it was Lucen the one in charge 🍀🍀
Though honestly he could think about a better name than Ellis xDD That's too similar to Elian!
Also, silly comment, but I could relate SO MUCH to this sentence: "I didn't pay much attention to that part of the meeting". I feel you Lucen. Some meetings are REALLY tiresome 🥲

Exiled — Rekindling the Flame

Chapter:27

Oct 07, 2026

I LOVED this chapter 💕💕💕💕
What a better way to gain some self-confidence and trust his power again than using it to save Kaia 😭😭😭 The part with him hesitating because he didn't dare hurt her and then her saying that: "...best fire wielder." Best duo 😭💕
And well, they have been caught, so it seems it's also time to see some old faces 🙈

Exiled — Rekindling the Flame

Chapter:26

Oct 07, 2026

To:JT The Wolf

Thorny taking one hell of a rest time while the others worked so hard to bring him back 💆😎

The Dawn of the Wish Bearer

Chapter:29

Oct 07, 2026

To:JT The Wolf

Adish is actually pretty OP, if it weren't for his allergy that forces him to use antidotes 🫠
I also want to catch up with Oreon, but since I foresee that things are going to get quite messy in your story I preferred to actually have some proper time to read more than one chapter 😭

The Dawn of the Wish Bearer

Chapter:27

Oct 07, 2026

To:JT The Wolf

Poor Adish, they had the nerve to leave him out of Nona's romatic life xDD

The Dawn of the Wish Bearer

Chapter:26

Oct 06, 2026

Nooo Brinja left the party 😭 I hope she appears again, or that she is at least mentioned.
Kaia is the best 💕 I loved how outraged she was when learning about Elian's past. She is completely right: Elian was just a kid doing his best in such a cruel world and his fate was so unfair. She is the best support he can have 😭😭💕
Time for some fire practice then. As Kaia say,s one branch at a time! 🌳🔥

Exiled — Rekindling the Flame

Chapter:25

Oct 06, 2026

The part with the children being recruited was right to the feels 😭😭😭 Little Elian thinking that his mother was crying out happiness when the woman must have been beyond devastated ooof. And she was pregnant on the top of that! The fact that Elian has a sibling he didn't get to know is so sad too 😞

Also I loved how natural was Kaia pointing out Elian's mark. It's obvious they have bonded during their trip and now they trust each other so I'm eagerly waiting when they finally realize that their feelings run deeper 😍😍

Exiled — Rekindling the Flame

Chapter:24

Oct 04, 2026

To:Kyotosomo

Certainly I would have liked to delve deeper intp certain topics (Aecor and Nona, both time skips) but I'm glad the story didn't feel extreeemely rushed despite it😭
Thank you a lot for all the likes and this feedback!!💕💕

The Dawn of the Wish Bearer

Chapter:37

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