Aug 30, 2023
To:lolitroy
OMG I think this is one of the most wholesome comments I've ever had in a story, thank you so so so much for taking the time to write this!!😱❤️❤️❤️
I'm very happy you liked the protagonists. As you say Eloy is more the gentle, calm type, but I'm glad that he didn't come out as 'passive' and that you got the feeling that they both made the story advance.
Regarding the girls, I totally agree: I would have liked to develop everyone more, but word limitation and the fact that I had to focus on describing the musical contest forced me not to delve deeper into that and only show glimpses of their lives (like Mako with divorced parents, an ex-police father and with the dream of writing a novel, or Narumi working on a tattoo parlor besides working in Harmony). In fact, there are characters that initially planned to make appear more (like Eloy's music teacher) but that were left as cameos, since I had to focus on the MC's to be able to tell the main story ^^U
However, if I ever write a sequel (something that, ngl, has crossed my mind while writing because there had been ideas that I haven't managed to develop for this one) I'll make sure to give those characters more love ❤️
In summary, and not to ramble too much, I'm very happy that you liked the story 😁😁😁 Muchíiiisimas gracias for all the support and the comments ❤️❤️ and again, LOTS OF LUCK for that last push!! (I'm reaaaaally looking forward to read how the story of my dear disaster boy Isao ends!!)
