Aug 25, 2023
I'll say that Miyu is a very cute female lead. I love her pouty attitude and tsundere qualities. The main character, Satoshi, is also enjoyable. I don't know if you're looking for criticism, but I'll give a little just because I feel like the biggest stuff I noticed is easy fixes.
I feel like you should add more detail to some scenes. Make conversations longer or describe a scene a little more. As it is, it feels a lot like a long list of this then this then this happened.
If you do that, you'll already have a massive improvement.