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Jun 19, 2023

To:lolitroy

take truly is my goat

My Grandma's Loving Maid Is My Classroom Neighbor?!

Chapter:10

Jun 19, 2023

To:lolitroy

for the grandma part, it's not exactly explained yet, but she ended up adopting Mina when Mina was ten and she was eighteen, due to circumstances explained later on. also, yes, pity is the stuff

My Grandma's Loving Maid Is My Classroom Neighbor?!

Chapter:1

Jun 19, 2023

To:Kaisei

well I'm glad it's easy to read, quick and fun is also nice to hear

My Grandma's Loving Maid Is My Classroom Neighbor?!

Chapter:1

Jun 19, 2023

To:Kaisei

much appreciated for the kind words.

My Grandma's Loving Maid Is My Classroom Neighbor?!

Chapter:0

Jun 19, 2023

fuck this goddess.
I mean, she was right...but she didn't have to be an ass about it

That Time I Was Reincarnated as the Villainess's Stat Menu and Tried to Get Her Attention

Chapter:2

Jun 19, 2023

what a nicely written chapter, and what a depressing way for someone to die. with luck he"lol still find happiness however things ends up.

That Time I Was Reincarnated as the Villainess's Stat Menu and Tried to Get Her Attention

Chapter:1

Jun 18, 2023

To:Bubbles

Thank you for the comment.
For where this is going, It's inexcusable to make people wait so long for the point of the story. Even if everything comes back around to relevance, it really isn't an excuse.

As for Yuta's personality, the goal was for someone who tries to be charismatic and takes on everyone's problems out of guilt for an event that he hints at in these chapters and reveals in, what I'm believing will be, chapter 18. However, if you have to ask what the hell is this guys personality than I can understand that I failed to make that obvious. The horny shit was also meant to play into another future plot point, but I should have made it obvious sooner.
Thanks for reading this far, at this point I'm just taking notes on everything that needs to be fixed as I move to the finish, but it sucks that I fucked up on the two basic principles of storytelling.

My Grandma's Loving Maid Is My Classroom Neighbor?!

Chapter:6

Jun 18, 2023

To:Bubbles

Valid

My Grandma's Loving Maid Is My Classroom Neighbor?!

Chapter:3

Jun 18, 2023

To:Bubbles

As uncultured swine, I look forward to reading Joyce and seeing what you mean

My Grandma's Loving Maid Is My Classroom Neighbor?!

Chapter:4

Jun 18, 2023

To:lolitroy

that's a serious prize, I'm sure he'd be happy to have it

My Grandma's Loving Maid Is My Classroom Neighbor?!

Chapter:12

Jun 18, 2023

To:lolitroy

as if he understands anything the poor boy

My Grandma's Loving Maid Is My Classroom Neighbor?!

Chapter:11

Jun 18, 2023

To:lolitroy

they are the best

My Grandma's Loving Maid Is My Classroom Neighbor?!

Chapter:9

Jun 18, 2023

To:lolitroy

yeah I get you, even if it isn't being brought up at the moment, it is still a big part of the story.

My Grandma's Loving Maid Is My Classroom Neighbor?!

Chapter:7

Jun 18, 2023

To:lolitroy

you know what?
agreed

My Grandma's Loving Maid Is My Classroom Neighbor?!

Chapter:8

Jun 18, 2023

To:lolitroy

good point, I love my good boy. as for the forgor his mom's is dead, I'll look into that, I don't recall seeing that in there.

My Grandma's Loving Maid Is My Classroom Neighbor?!

Chapter:7

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