Apr 15, 2025
(okay I'm low-key pissed Honeyfeed. This is the 3rd time I'm writing this from scratch because "robotic activity bs")
Here's the next chapter!
If you thought I was being lazy in chapter 16, you thought too soon! The long talk between Kenneth and Dave will be moved into some fragmented flashbacks starting in this chapter. I kind of figured no one would find Kenneth spitting facts for a chapter straight interesting, but dropping them in flashback-style whenever they're relevant should be a lot more engaging. Also, I think it should check out that these can be written in past tense, unless I'm having a brainfart here. If I do, pls lmk before the contest ends (which is soon, I really need to step up my game and edit these chapters faster!)
Roomtours might not sound awfully entertaining at first but trust me these guys are gonna spend the majority of the remaining story there so having a basic layout of the place should be beneficial in the long run plus I'm sneaking in cultural differences, making it more prompt-relevant and stuff.
Which reminds me, some places in the house can be... awkward. Especially with a language barrier in place! You'll see what I mean tomorrow, when I drop the next one!
