Mar 01, 2025
Here's the next chapter, guys! If you've read the synopsis, you probably know who Dave and his crew just stumbled upon and that kid is going to narrate parts of the story. Might be a tough sell to have two characters use 1st person narrative but I've seen it being done by published authors before. You'll probably see why I made that decision once Dave's group has dealt with the current situation.
Also, from now on there will always be an indicator when a perspective changes to avoid confusion (if there's none at the start of a chapter, the perspective doesn't change)
To reflect the fact that the kid is, well, a kid, the language used will be considerably less elaborate and more simple when she's narrating. It's not a bug, it's a feature! 😅
Thanks for reading!
