Valentine / Comments

Valentine

Hii!
I'm valentine, I like to worldbuild and draw fantasy maps, and occasionally i write usually in universe books for my setting.

If you like some of my works, please check out my webpage, it is essentially a wiki of my worldbuilding and it would make my day if you decide to check it out!

registered at: Jun 18, 2023

Roles

Author

Badge

bronze

What is Badge?

Achievement

What is an Achievement?

Report this user

Comments

aaa

Aug 10, 2023

It might read as "I'd have to probe into that later", but for some reason, how I imagined it was Walden saying to himself, "Note to self: Dig into my sister's past for a protentional bargaining chip"

Full Moon! Through the Rings of Love

Chapter:4

Aug 10, 2023

"We really sucked at negotiations..." reading this made me relive the pain of playing a Ck3 character with 0 diplomacy and seeing my kingdom collapse just months after he took the throne...

Full Moon! Through the Rings of Love

Chapter:3

Aug 10, 2023

The scene where Walden seeing his level jumped to 99 was just amazing, I hope every chapter could make me laugh that much!
ooo and a map, and with directions and a name as well, if more keeps popping out, I might have to draw it out! With the rings and the moon, the concept for how to map's gonna look is already forming in my mind!

Full Moon! Through the Rings of Love

Chapter:2

Aug 10, 2023

Keeping a secret for his own pride, that really made me laugh!
And magic with wands, I really miss those, too much magic systems can be cast with just the mage's hand and a few words now days lol

Full Moon! Through the Rings of Love

Chapter:1

Aug 10, 2023

I'll be honest, I thought this would be another more generic isekai reading the first chapter. But then in the second chapter, the Paltar's early life builds his character and personality really well! And the way you introduce his threads is well paced, from just showing it off, then connecting it with life(or a soul) and adding a color to it.

A grumpy mentor or teacher is pretty common but for some reason, I feel that the two of them really fits each other. Then onto the goose and princess, you slowly introduce magic and curses, fairy tales and child stories. No words could express how much I like a story within a story, hope you would show us even just a couple words from the book Paltar's mother read to him!!

Oh, and sorry for bulk commenting instead of doing per chapter lol, but I feel it would be easier to give my respond this way...

ZAUBER: the thread that binds us

Chapter:4

Aug 08, 2023

All your characters are very cute, it's very fun to read!

And your style of writing is very straight forward, both feelings and descriptions. I usually read stories with a little more intrigue in their words but I feel like your way really fits your story, for very light hearted characters wrapped around a simple but nice story :3

The Sound of Love

Chapter:4

Aug 03, 2023

Robin staring at legs, he can't keep getting away with this... and he thought that Andrea would bet a live together just like that, don't know if I should call him ambitious or that he had a big ego.
The football game itself was also pretty nice, with just the scores and a few description, it's very simple and easy to follow, even to me who never touch sports or even go outside much lol

Kicks & Bows

Chapter:12

Aug 01, 2023

To:minatika

I did a little research on summer festivals since I had one in my story as well, and bonfires were apparently a celebratory event. I specifically searched for summer solstice but its closed enough and I think its Sweden who has it, some other cultures probably do too but I might be wrong

With a Love Sorceress I'll Make My Romance Last!

Chapter:28

Aug 01, 2023

Toren chasing bubbles is one of the best images in this chapter(second only to the last scene)
And the festival is a lot more chill(?) than I thought, I imagined a lot more rice wine and paper lanterns, maybe because I semi celebrate mid-autumn festival, or moon festival(according to google, since I only know its chinese name) is coming up and your festival’s name is similar to that.
Mia saying “there he goes to commune with the trees again made me laugh so hard lol

With a Love Sorceress I'll Make My Romance Last!

Chapter:28

Jul 30, 2023

Pointing out secrets and weakness... "hide" to Azurillia probably means that she only shows her real self to Minoru, and "orb" means Minoru's overly large life orb, those makes sense but I can't really think of anything about "likes" and "reflect"... His life orb likes to reflect? but what does that mean, hmmm

Your Lovely Spirit

Chapter:8

Jul 29, 2023

Can’t wait for what is next for the festival, and I wonder how the bidding war for Mia’s land is gonna go, hope it’s as chaotic as how I’m imagining it lol

With a Love Sorceress I'll Make My Romance Last!

Chapter:27

Jul 25, 2023

The flying fishes and dragon-like birds sound so pretty, your descriptions are still so amazing! And I laughed so hard reading the pancake scene, since my story also have a running joke with weird tasting food that the main character hates but the other really likes, but mine’s insanely sweet instead than sour.

Your Lovely Spirit

Chapter:7

Jul 24, 2023

"... trying to shift the focus onto her friend." Still just friends??
Minoru being friend zoned aside, the entire chapter is extremely cute!!

Your Lovely Spirit

Chapter:6

Jul 23, 2023

It's a nice start, the premise is pretty interesting and it does make me want to find out how the rest or the story goes.

The Isekai Lie

Chapter:0

Jul 22, 2023

ooo, A fight between Toren and Roki!! Why little kids always have to interrupt fights like these… And Roki actually did firebolt the cat boy in the face, just as I praised him for not doing it a few chapters ago.
Then Toren gave up on trying to win over Mia, does this mean the other fate manipulators failed even after sending Toren? Would they try again, sending another person over?

With a Love Sorceress I'll Make My Romance Last!

Chapter:24

Valentine

Novels

Gallery

Comments

Reviews

aaa