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Valentine

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I'm valentine, I like to worldbuild and draw fantasy maps, and occasionally i write usually in universe books for my setting.

If you like some of my works, please check out my webpage, it is essentially a wiki of my worldbuilding and it would make my day if you decide to check it out!

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Aug 21, 2023

Things are wrapping up nicely, the next chapter is gonna be the last right? Sorry I haven't comment much on this story 😅 I'm not that good at commenting on more emotions and feelings focus stories, so I'll give my full review on the ending chapter :)

Our Greatest Comeback: Thanks to your beautiful light

Chapter:45

Aug 19, 2023

ooo, another merfolk, best character so far! What do you mean I'm biased... though she's a lot more watery than mine lol.

And Claire could have made normal people into faint stars, hmm... What if, and what if she accidentally made Roki into a world champion? I'm still hell bent on thinking he is more than just a normal star!

And I didn't expect to see you describe the void(?) like this, with its infinite and beyond comprehension nature, I really like it! Even though it had been mentioned before but I don't think it was this detailed, or maybe I just forgot... It's actually kinda similar to what I tend to like writing about or imagining, but I usually do it in a more godly way, and a bit more destructive.

With a Love Sorceress I'll Make My Romance Last!

Chapter:37

Aug 19, 2023

Can't believe there's not one but two characters worse than cougar killer...

Full Moon! Through the Rings of Love

Chapter:23

Aug 18, 2023

The birbs might have evolved but Walden still needs the fly HM from route 16

Full Moon! Through the Rings of Love

Chapter:21

Aug 18, 2023

Actually feel a little bad for Amamiya, she sounded like she wanna give him another chance. I kinda wanna see how's earth Toren is like tho.

And reading "A few pedestrian gave me concerned glances, before continuing on their way", it honestly felt a bit too close to heart, perks of having social anxiety...

With a Love Sorceress I'll Make My Romance Last!

Chapter:36

Aug 17, 2023

I guess Walden had been kinda mean at times, but the fact that he is so unapologetically crap to cougar killer and his sense of sarcasm is why I like him so much

Full Moon! Through the Rings of Love

Chapter:19

Aug 16, 2023

To:Ducky123

By description dense, I meant that your story felt like it’s showing and telling every second that happened and it gets a little boring sometimes. But I also very, very rarely read slice of life or even just stories set in modern times in general so maybe that’s what you are going for, and if that’s the case don’t let me stop you!!

And I also forgot to mention last time, congrats for reaching 1k views!! Found you selling out in the discord lol, I also reached 1k a little while ago :D
Also sorry I haven’t read more of your story yet, I’m editing my story and I’m still 5k off the word minimum and have started 8 or 9 other stories… I get back to reading it as soon as I have time <3

My childhood friend ran away from home and now I have to share a room with her?!

Chapter:1

Aug 16, 2023

"Luna cringed at all their roughhousing" is a scene I can picture perfectly, maybe a little too perfect that I couldn't stop laughing...

Full Moon! Through the Rings of Love

Chapter:17

Aug 16, 2023

"...and resurrect, so I can conquer this nation." really made me laugh lol

The Skeleton & The Idiot Sorceress

Chapter:1

Aug 16, 2023

The part where Paltar couldn't push through a wall of adults was actually kinda chilling, then his dad picked him up with a really heavy sense of fatherly love. And for some reason after reading this, I feel like something bad is gonna happen to him...

ZAUBER: the thread that binds us

Chapter:18

Aug 15, 2023

Your place names are still so good!! And a layer of politics, always nice to see, and wanna see how you use them in your story. I originally wanted to write a more political story, but decided against it since it'll probably turn into a lore dumb if I do, but even so, my story rn just turned somewhat into a religion and location info dump...

Enchanted by a Witch From a Realm Called Earth

Chapter:4

Aug 14, 2023

Its a very nice start, keep it up! But I have to agree with some of the comments, the paragraphs are a little long and hard to read, they're also a bit descriptions dense...

My childhood friend ran away from home and now I have to share a room with her?!

Chapter:1

Aug 14, 2023

Luna and Walden's fight, it's actually a littler tamer than I thought, but Luna is one of he arguer so I shouldn't expect much from the first place lol

And birds of legends, I wonder how they'll turn out, but I can already feel a rapid growth for them in a chapter or 2 and epic dragon(or bird) flights ensures

Full Moon! Through the Rings of Love

Chapter:14

Aug 14, 2023

As someone with 2 countries worth of extended tea culture and history(3 if you could our local variant), I would really like to try Luna's moon grass tea lol

Full Moon! Through the Rings of Love

Chapter:13

Aug 14, 2023

Always knew Roki was more than just a normal star, though neither a world champion nor a world breaker, maybe he birthed a new kind of star, one unknown to even fate weavers and world breakers...

For some reason, I really want to see Toren's reaction if Roki tells him about all this lol, pls make this happen... even just as a really, really short spinoff chapter

With a Love Sorceress I'll Make My Romance Last!

Chapter:34

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