Sep 11, 2023
He became a doctor?! :O And Kasumi is a nurse working with him! They even got married!! :D Crafting dreams to help comatose patients recover, with Grace's aid, is the perfect ending for this story < 3 They have such a compassionate job, and their success rate is off the charts!! :D Grace supleeex!!! xD Although she’s still there, I’m a bit sad her real body died :< Nevertheless, it was all still very wholesome, and I’m happy everyone had a successful future!!! < 3 < 3
I feel a great care in your story, the pacing is perfect, nothing feels too little or too much, and there is a lot of attention to detail. Haru and Kasumi are an endearing pair, their interactions are always funny! She’s a teaser, and I love it x) I also loved how you handled Grace and how she ended up helping so many people after changing Haru's life! Your story has become one of my favorites here! Thank you for writing, Kaze! Congratulations, I really enjoyed reading your novel < 3 < 3 < 3