Funsui

Funsui

registered at: Jun 23, 2023
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    Participant - MAL x Honeyfeed Writing Contest 2023






    Sep 04, 2023

    To:minatika

    I wanted Yada/Momo to show her immense affection for Ru, so I’m very proud of how she turned out! :3 And also the love they share! I wanted to relay that they understand each other exceptionally well because they've been together for a long time, but not in an exaggerated way, like the sweet romance of a long-lasting couple.

    And yeah, I couldn’t let this story end without the inevitable wall of “No!” xD

    I’m thrilled because your interpretation of the essence of Baba is precisely what I wanted to convey at first (and still is the most essential meaning) :D I wanted to leave no doubt about that… but then I couldn’t, his character grew too much xD So, that was the reason why I decided to write an ambiguous ending. Although it may open an even worse scenario, and besides your interpretation, I could also imagine that Baba might actually be real, that he was there all along, and because he had a different name, Momo didn’t understand when he mentioned him… Or they might even be meeting now for the first time! x)

    Of course I love your fan art!!! It was incredibly sweet of you and always melted my heart each time I saw it on the novel’s page when writing and posting new chapters!! :3 I can’t imagine anything else capturing the soul of my story as faithfully as that < 3

    Your kind words leave me speechless… Knowing that my story is one of your favorites fills me with so much joy, no words can even describe it!!! < 3 I couldn't have finished the novel without your amazing support, it really meant a lot to me!! Thank you so much, Mina! You’re the best < 3 < 3 < 3

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    YADA
    YADA
    Chapter:17


    Sep 02, 2023

    That was wild! Since I’ve been reading mostly heartwarming stories, this was a complete 180 x) But I picked it up because I thought it could be a good break and change of pace, and I wasn’t wrong, it was awesome!! At the start, because of the Creatures setting, I thought it was going to turn out like some horror Pokemon but with killing blobs all the way through (and in the end, it had a bit of that) xD I loved following the narrative from different perspectives (Yetil and her journal, Shihan, the news articles, and the online response). It created so much suspense!!! What she did to him was crazy!! :< I liked how you left some things open for interpretation. Was he joking at the interview? Is he really from another world and could create and control the blobs? Did she find anything weird with his body? It didn’t seem that Shihan was the one who commanded the blob at the end, maybe it was the hooded figure? (And maybe that figure was Mahne or the director?) So, I don’t think you need the novel’s last sentence. The chapter where you wrote the chloroform trial-and-error is really well done, and you can clearly see that she was practicing with dogs and ultimately kidnapped Shihan. I think it undermines it a little (although I understand it was the news discovering her notes and making the connection). I hope I'm not overstepping, it is just a minuscule nitpicking because I truly enjoyed reading your story!! < 3

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    Yetil
    A Rising Star
    Chapter:17