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Mario Nakano 64

It's a me. I'm an aspiring light novel writer hoping to one day see my works in anime form. I hope that my works at least brighten up your day and give you something to look forward to.

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Jul 23, 2024

Guess it really was Ekko. Though I'm more impressed with Bear. He predicted their movements and has just been waiting for them. Unless he plans to let them go, everyone's in for a rough fight.

The Pill That Killed Romance

Chapter:35

Jul 23, 2024

Well, that didn't last long. Bear likely found the dummies instantly. Though is that Ekko at the end? I'm not sure though, could be a fake-out.

The Pill That Killed Romance

Chapter:34

Jul 23, 2024

Author's Commentary #103:

Time to talk about Chapter 103: Rika vs Benihime.
Something that never happened in the original, but was built up to happen, was Benihime learning of Rika's past and not taking it well. Here however, it was time to address that plot-point.

When Benihime learned, she immediately tried to kill Rika, but Rika effortlessly stomped her. Had Rika not been pregnant, she likely would have let Benihime rough her up a bit, but since now she's got a baby growing inside of her, she won't allow any harm to come to them.

Another major difference from the original is the snap election. There was a major election in the original, but it took place in October 2017, which was also when the real-world House of representatives election took place in Japan. I felt that time skipping to that point ended up hurting the story, so for the remake, I decided to move the election date up to April 2017.

This next arc will obviously be the big confrontation with Ookuma, and will naturally be far different from the arc in the original it was modeled after. I hope you're looking forward to it.

That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

Spice of life [Remake]

Chapter:103

Jul 22, 2024

Author's Commentary #102:

Time to talk about Chapter 102: The end of the nightmare.
So this past week, I ended up getting sick, but since I had a backlog of this series saved as drafts, I could simply just log in and upload the chapters as normal. This is why many of my author commentaries have been delayed, but now are caught up. Funnily enough, I ended up getting better just as the arc ended. Now let's talk about it.

So a lot went down in this arc. Masaru got messed up, Rika mentally tormented, and Waki killed off. Yes, unlike in the original, Waki dies. Though perhaps as a way to balance out all the bad, Rika is also pregnant. While the Roboborg union arc is over, things sadly won't show signs of improving. Ookuma is still pulling the strings along with the mysterious Averice and Gula.

Speaking of those two, they won't really be appearing in the story again as they're intended to be the main antagonists in a different novel, whenever I get around to writing it that is.

グラ (Gula) and アヴェリス (Averice) are how both their names are spelled in katakana. The two don't really have birthdays, nor does Averice really have have a favorite food. Gula, however likes eating anything except Nero's dark flames of destruction.

One other thing I'll briefly mention is Honoka. Honoka Shibawara actually did appear briefly in the originally, but in the remake, I've revamped her role in the story. She might make a proper appearance before the story ends, but I'll give her bio anyway.

柴原火佳 (Shibawara Honoka) is how her name is spelled in kanji. 火佳 means "fire" and "beauty", while 柴原 means "firewood" and "origin".
(If I made any mistakes with the translations, feel free to correct me).

Her birthday is July 16th. I chose the date at random, so there's no greater significance behind why this date is her birthday.

Her favorite food is spicy curry.

And with that, the arc I never got to add to the original is finally complete, however, the effects of it will be felt for the rest of the story. Things are also more tense with Benihime than in the original. Perhaps a major confrontation is looming between her and Rika.

That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

Spice of life [Remake]

Chapter:102

Jul 22, 2024

Author's Commentary #101:

Time to talk about Chapter 101: Master of gravity.
It's not the final chapter of the arc, but Nero and Ryuujin don't care, Laqutte's going down. And he most certainly did as now he is gone and truly dead. Now let's talk about Ryuujin.

湯間竜人 (Yuma Ryuujin) his how his name is spelled in kanji. 竜人 means "dragon" and "human", while 湯間 means "hot water" and "space".
(If I made any mistakes with the translations, feel free to correct me).

His birthday is October 1st. I chose the date at random, so there's no greater significance behind why this date is his birthday.

His favorite food is guavas.

Ryuujin was originally a character from a novel that I planned to make my magnum opus. However, I ended up deeming the work not good enough, and decided to toss it to the rewrite pile. Ryuujin is one of Nero's minions who he trained in order to fight. He also received his powers from him as well.

That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

Spice of life [Remake]

Chapter:101

Jul 22, 2024

Author's Commentary #100:

Time to talk about Chapter 100: Mimi's rage.
The series has reached it's 100th chapter, and is now just short of surpassing the original by about 23 or so chapters. What better way to celebrate then to have Mimi kick ass.

This chapter was all Mimi. She showcased her growth, and defended the restaurant. Nero only had to ensure the threat was truly eliminated. As for the flask, it contained Ginkawa milk which is why Mimi was able to heal up like crazy. She also carefully calculated the blow in order to minimize it's lethality, thanks to the little Hylda from her imagination. Now, all that's left is to destroy the Roboborg union, which you can bet Nero most certainly will do.

That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

Spice of life [Remake]

Chapter:100

Jul 22, 2024

Author's Commentary #99:

Time to talk about Chapter 99: Waki's poison.
This is the moment I've been hinting at for a long time. Remember the traitor plot-line? Well here it's finally brought up again. Turns out Mille was the traitor all along. I had originally planned for her traitor arc to be completely wrapped up withing Mystery ghost foresight, but obviously that never happened. That, and I felt it would be better if she and Mimi faced off.

If it wasn't apparent last chapter, all the key members of the Roboborg union are named after the monsters from Greek mythology that were created by Typhon and Echidna. CH1-M3R4 is obviously Chimera, EC1-DNA is Echidna, and Mille's L3R-N43-4NH is referencing the Lernaean hydra.

Since I felt the series could use some more battles, I decided now was a good time to do so. Though the battle looks to be overwhelmingly in the Roboborg union's favor. Perhaps a strong ally will arrive soon.

That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

Spice of life [Remake]

Chapter:99

Jul 22, 2024

[Game log #86]

Here's the game from the International chess day special. The game is actually the infamous 9-move mate game that was played between Fabiano Caruana and Alireza Firouzja in the Crunchlabs Masters 2024. In the game, Firouzja ended up falling for what many dub, "the 100 year old trick" which allowed Caruana to achieve a winning position as white. Firouzja resigned after realizing this.

I decided to extend the game and show one of the possible ways to mate, notably what happens if black takes both rooks. As for why the game is called "the 100 year old trick", that's due to the same rook sacrifice plan being used, albeit in a slightly different way, in a game between Carl Schlechter and Julius Perlis in 1911. Funnily enough, this also invokes some word of advice from the series itself as Mimoko made it a point that sometimes capturing a hanging rook could be bad.

[Event "?"]
[Site "?"]
[Date "????.??.??"]
[Round "?"]
[White "The author"]
[Black "Kisha Shinbun"]
[Result "1-0"]

1. c4 c6 2. Nf3 d5 3. g3 Bg4 4. Ne5 Bf5 5. Qb3 Qb6 6. cxd5 Qxb3 7. axb3 Be4 8. dxc6 Bxh1 9. Rxa7 Rxa7 10. c7 Ra8 11. c8=R# 1-0

En Passant Grandmaster

Chapter:148

Jul 22, 2024

Author's Commentary #148:

Time to talk about Chapter 148: Happy International chess day.
So I recently got sick and as such, I was unable to write or do author commentaries until I get better. Since I'm doing these now, I'm obviously feeling much better. However, when I learned that July 20th was International chess day, I pushed myself to make this chapter even though I was sick.

The game in particular ended up being a lifesaver. For you see, the game is actually the infamous 9-move mate game that was played between Fabiano Caruana and Alireza Firouzja in the Crunchlabs Masters 2024. In the game, Firouzja ended up falling for what many dub, "the 100 year old trick" which allowed Caruana to achieve a winning position as white. Firouzja resigned after realizing this.

I decided to extend the game and show one of the possible ways to mate. Funnily enough, Firouzja ended up bouncing back from the loss and made it to the grand finals of the event. As for why the game is called "the 100 year old trick", that's due to the same rook sacrifice plan being used, albeit in a slightly different way, in a game between Carl Schlechter and Julius Perlis in 1911. Funnily enough, this also invokes some word of advice from the series itself as Mimoko made it a point that sometimes capturing a hanging rook could be bad.

If I was feeling better, I probably would have featured a more extravagant game with the main cast, but I think that this was good considering the circumstances. As for the series, It will probably be on break for a bit longer, though I do plan to post something a special chapter on Mimoko's birthday, so look forward to that. Season 4 will likely be one of the shortest seasons, but that's honestly because Season 5 is shaping up to be something big. I thank everyone who's supported this series. There is more good things to come.

That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

En Passant Grandmaster

Chapter:148

Jul 22, 2024

Author's Commentary #147:

Time to talk about Chapter 147: Interview the author Part 4: The top 10 most hated characters.
Originally, I didn't plan for this to be the last part of the interview, but I ended up getting sick and decided to change course. Though International chess day was the big thing that made me change up my plans more, as I felt that as a chess writer, I was required to do something for that.

Luckily, an opportunity presented itself, and I got the chapter done. I also hadn't even compiled a list of my top 10 favorite chapters yet, so it made sense not to prioritize that over the International chess day special.

That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

En Passant Grandmaster

Chapter:147

Jul 19, 2024

To:Taylor J

Iori once again proving she's the queen of sadism. Though Okisato's also not to phased by this stuff, mainly because he's just seen so much of it.

En Passant Grandmaster

Chapter:15

Jul 19, 2024

To:SkeletonIdiot

Funnily enough, it's literally a hammer-katana made out of dark flames. I've always liked katanas and hammers as weapons so I decided to combine them to make the ultimate weapon.

Spice of Life

Chapter:106

Jul 19, 2024

To:Taylor J

Perhaps it's just because Ko reminds me of Yalda, and it got me thinking that maybe Ko was the precursor to her. That, and I also can't help but think the father is related to Yalda's father. Then again, I'm not caught up on Face of Eternity so I could be completely wrong.😆

The Pill That Killed Romance

Chapter:33

Jul 18, 2024

Author's Commentary #45:

Time to talk about Chapter 45: Super Jester bros super shitshow.
Hey paisanos! It's the super Jester bros super shitshow!
It's the Jester bros, not the Mario bros. But they ripped em off anyway and stole their intro song. A parody of the Super Mario bros super show, it lacks all the goodwill cuz it's the big bad Jester. Aaaaaassss for Pistachio Ragu, the Italian pizza chef, he's a parody of Pizza Tower's Peppino Spaghetti! He ran out of town on the whims of a lie, but when he sees Jester again he'll suplex him and Vinny! UH!

How'd you like that rap? Anyway, this was a really fun chapter from the original that I naturally had to include it in the remake. There was also a crazy hamburger reference thrown in there as well. Overall, this was a rather fun and lighthearted chapter.

As for the next arc, it's very likely the series will go on break for a few days. The arc is mostly finished, but I need a little more time and the daily updates are getting a bit harder to keep up with. I'll still do my best to ensure the series is high-quality though.

That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

Escape:Witch [Remake]

Chapter:45

Jul 18, 2024

Author's Commentary #98:

Time to talk about Chapter 98: The hell of Tartarus.
Some of you might remember, but EC1-DNA actually made her debut way back in Chapter 23 at the underworld banquet. Her name is an obvious pun on Echidna from Greek mythology. Considering the Roboborg union is headed by T. Phon and EC1-DNA, I'm sure you can probably guess what the naming scheme and theme for them will be.

As for the chapter, this obviously never happened in the original, though I was planning to make it the final arc. However, I decided not to, since I hadn't written it at the time, and just thought it would be better to save it for the remake. And now, not even readers of the original will be able to know what direction the story will take.

That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

Spice of life [Remake]

Chapter:98

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