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It's a me. I'm an aspiring light novel writer hoping to one day see my works in anime form. I hope that my works at least brighten up your day and give you something to look forward to.
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Sep 15, 2025
Now this was a good chapter. You did an amazing job making Ivanov a detestable bastard you want to see get beaten to a pulp.
I loved the tension this chapter had, but again, was it really necessary to give a recap of Lucy's state? Here it just feels completely unnecessary and I'd honestly recommend editing it out.
It is getting a little repetitive having each chapter open by narrating how Lucy's body has aged while her mind hasn't.
I'm starting to notice these chapters are getting long. Nothing wrong with long chapters, and since the contest period has long since passed, I won't recommend breaking up the chapters as it's no longer bound to follow the chapter word count guidelines of it.
Hmm, not a big fan of all the em dashes. I feel too many of them ruin the immersion.
It's never this easy. Hopefully they can get the rest of the parts to build the stabilizer.
Looks like this is the final new chapter to Season 1, unless a chapter I already read was heavily edited. So far, it looks like most of the new chapters boiled down to expanding things out which is nice, but not essential for understanding things in season 3.
Even though it's been months since I last read this, I was quickly able to get reimmersed in the world, and be reminded of how cruel and gritty it is.
It's probably because it's been so long since I read the 1st season, but I do remember there was an exhibition where Miko fought. I'm pretty sure she fought Elliot in the original, but I don't remember her beating him so senselessly.
Been a while, but I'm back to try and finish reading this whole thing. Looks like you fixed some of the formatting stuff others had issue with.
Hmm, looks like this is more of an added exposition chapter. Not detrimental if I had skipped it over, but I want to read all the new chapters first before delving into the new season.
It's been a while, but I'm back to read more. Since I noticed there were some new chapters added in Season 1, I decided to go back and read them before making my way up to Chapter 30 and Season 3. I have to say, this backstory is sad, and adds so much more to Kayla's character.
The demon infiltration thing is not something most fantasies do. I think Strongest hero with the weakest crest is the best example of Demon infiltration to sabotage the humans that I can think of.
Wonder what would happen if Rein chugged some of that hero elixir.
I asked my question about Rein's age to early. He's 11 now, right?