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Mario Nakano 64

It's a me. I'm an aspiring light novel writer hoping to one day see my works in anime form. I hope that my works at least brighten up your day and give you something to look forward to.

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Dec 07, 2025

En Passant... Grandmaster? Sorry, couldn't resist.

The Value In Being Alone

Chapter:8

Dec 07, 2025

Curious, have you ever played a game series called Putt-Putt? The only reason I ask is because all the "Pep" is making me think of the character, Pep, from that series.

The Value In Being Alone

Chapter:6

Dec 07, 2025

Now I know I shouldn't dwell on this game too much, but I found that if Sai goes 3... d6 instead of 3... d5, it opens up the path for 4. Nf3 Nc6 5. Bc4 Nxe4 and 6. Bxf7+. With 3... d5 transitioning into the Vienna Game: Main Line, the opportunities for Kaburi to get the opportunity to even play Bxf7+ are minuscule given Sai is said to play solidly. That being said, I just thought it would be fun to point out.

The Value In Being Alone

Chapter:4

Dec 07, 2025

I see what you mean when you warned me about this game. First off, the Vienna Gambit is by no means bad, in fact, the eval bar puts it at dead even. Following 3. d5 fxe5 is where what you warned about truly comes into play. You made reference to a bishop sac on f7, so I tried to figure out how to get that. I tried many ways, but I couldn't find it. I do think it could be possible, though with the added stipulations that it leads to winning a knight, it becomes a bit more difficult to pull off. Regardless, the writing overall is really enjoyable.

The Value In Being Alone

Chapter:4

Dec 07, 2025

To:Kirb

"Bad Gambit"? Well, now you've just ensured I'll binge to that chapter, my friend.

The Value In Being Alone

Chapter:1

Dec 07, 2025

To:Kirb

No worries. But like with this one, if I'm able to try and theorize the moves that play out, I'll share my findings.

The Value In Being Alone

Chapter:1

Dec 07, 2025

As a gift, here's a game log of the game played here. I included the theorized moves following 7. Nd4.

[Event "?"]
[Site "?"]
[Date "????.??.??"]
[Round "N/A"]
[White "Sai"]
[Black "Kaburi"]
[Result "1-0"]
[Link "https://www.chess.com/analysis"]

1. d4 e5 2. dxe5 Nc6 3. Nf3 Qe7 4. Bf4 Qb4+ 5. Bd2 Qxb2 6. Nc3 Nb4 7. Nd4 a6 8. Rb1 Qa3 9. e4 Nc6 10. Nd5 Nxd4 11. Nxc7+ 1-0

The Value In Being Alone

Chapter:1

Dec 07, 2025

So this is your chess series. As far as first impressions go, I love that you list the moves so readers can follow along. There is a small mistake though. On move three, for Black, you have "Queen e2" instead of "Queen e7". The same goes for move 4 for White where it should be "Bishop f4" instead of "Bishop e4". With those typos fixed, everything plays out smoothly. Curious about how the rook-king fork comes to be, I tested some things out and found that the continuation of 7... a6 8. Rb1 Qa3 9. e4 Nc6 10. Nd5 Nxd4 will result in 11. Nxc7+. The game pretty much lost for Black at move 7, so resigning there wouldn't have been a bad move either. Looking forward to how future games in this story play out.

The Value In Being Alone

Chapter:1

Dec 07, 2025

So Pippa's human form is actually human? I was kind of hoping her human form would be all-pink humanoid body with Kirby face.

Piracy In Another World: I Will Plunder The System

Chapter:7

Dec 07, 2025

And now I've reached the latest chapter. To be honest, I'm not sure I'll continue reading this one. Though you might have some intriguing ideas for games, if you don't provide more detailed descriptions of the moves being taken, it's really hard to follow along. Regardless, I wish you the best of luck with your story.