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Mario Nakano 64

It's a me. I'm an aspiring light novel writer hoping to one day see my works in anime form. I hope that my works at least brighten up your day and give you something to look forward to.

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Sep 15, 2025

I'm starting to notice these chapters are getting long. Nothing wrong with long chapters, and since the contest period has long since passed, I won't recommend breaking up the chapters as it's no longer bound to follow the chapter word count guidelines of it.

The Drift of Time

Chapter:10

Sep 15, 2025

Hmm, not a big fan of all the em dashes. I feel too many of them ruin the immersion.

The Drift of Time

Chapter:9

Sep 15, 2025

It's never this easy. Hopefully they can get the rest of the parts to build the stabilizer.

The Drift of Time

Chapter:8

Sep 15, 2025

Looks like this is the final new chapter to Season 1, unless a chapter I already read was heavily edited. So far, it looks like most of the new chapters boiled down to expanding things out which is nice, but not essential for understanding things in season 3.

Your Healer

Chapter:16

Sep 15, 2025

Even though it's been months since I last read this, I was quickly able to get reimmersed in the world, and be reminded of how cruel and gritty it is.

The Drift of Time

Chapter:7

Sep 15, 2025

It's probably because it's been so long since I read the 1st season, but I do remember there was an exhibition where Miko fought. I'm pretty sure she fought Elliot in the original, but I don't remember her beating him so senselessly.

Your Healer

Chapter:14

Sep 15, 2025

Been a while, but I'm back to try and finish reading this whole thing. Looks like you fixed some of the formatting stuff others had issue with.

The Drift of Time

Chapter:6

Sep 15, 2025

Hmm, looks like this is more of an added exposition chapter. Not detrimental if I had skipped it over, but I want to read all the new chapters first before delving into the new season.

Your Healer

Chapter:7

Sep 15, 2025

It's been a while, but I'm back to read more. Since I noticed there were some new chapters added in Season 1, I decided to go back and read them before making my way up to Chapter 30 and Season 3. I have to say, this backstory is sad, and adds so much more to Kayla's character.

Your Healer

Chapter:6

Sep 15, 2025

The demon infiltration thing is not something most fantasies do. I think Strongest hero with the weakest crest is the best example of Demon infiltration to sabotage the humans that I can think of.