Mario Nakano 64

Mario Nakano 64

It's a me. I'm an aspiring light novel writer hoping to one day see my works in anime form. I hope that my works at least brighten up your day and give you something to look forward to.

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    Sep 30, 2024

    Author's Commentary #45:

    Time to discuss Chapter 45: The Inoue household.
    This originally served as the introduction chapter for Mimoko's family, but I felt it was better to introduce them in Chapter 1 since their presence there helped the chapter, and by extension the story, flow better.

    This chapter however does finally reveal the names of Mimoko's parents so I'll give some brief bios on them after I do Kotora's.

    Kotora is 12 years old and was born on February 29th. On non leap years, his birthday is celebrated on February 28th. Believe it or not, his mother Daria's birthday is actually February 27th. She even thought they'd be sharing a a birthday, but Kotora ended up being born 2 days later.

    井之上 小虎 (Inoue Kotora) is his full name in kanji. His first name, 小虎, ends up translating to "little tiger".

    Since Mimoko's the only member of her family that plays chess, none of her family members have a favorite piece. Kotora has played chess though, and developed a distaste for it thanks in no small part to Mimoko always destroying him in it. Now onto Daria and Ichimitsu.

    Daria's full name in kanji is 井之上 堕美闇 (Inoue Daria). Her first name,
    堕美闇, can translate to "lazy", "beautiful", and "ignorant".

    Now on to Ichimitsu. 井之上 一光 (Inoue Ichimitsu) is how his full name is spelled in kanji.
    His first name, 一光, can translate to "one" and "radiance".

    Ichimitsu's birthday falls on November 30th and he's 45 years old. He tends to stay at home and makes a living trading stocks. He also enjoys reading the paper, or rather holding the paper like he's reading it.

    This chapter was originally Chapter 43, but got pushed back a bit due to the revisions. However, Okisato's family still appears at the end of it, so I'll give their bios too. First up is his sister, Otona.

    Her full name in kanji is 田辺 乙那 (Tanabe Otona). Her first name, 乙那, means "second" and "beautiful".

    Her birthday is November 23rd, which is Labor Thanksgiving Day in Japan.

    Thanks to Okisato, she's actually a 600 rated chess player, and as such has a favorite piece; the queen.

    Now onto Okisato and Otona's father, Yojiro. At first, he was adamant about Okisato learning shogi as a pastime, but once Okisato became good at chess and showed him the financial benefits of the chess world, he allowed Okisato to pursue chess and even teach all his men to play the game. He himself ended up becoming second only to Okisato in terms of skill and has a rating of 1868. There actually is significance behind his rating since 1868 is actually the first year of the Meiji era.

    田辺 与次郎 (Tanabe Yojiro) is how his name is written in kanji.
    His first name, 与次郎, means "to give", "next", and "man".
    (If I made any mistakes with the translations, feel free to correct me).

    Intriguingly enough, Yojiro's birthday is October 23rd which was the first day of the Meiji era back in 1868.

    Like his son, he believes the pawn is the most useful piece on and off the board.

    Okisato's family won't play as large a role in the greater story as compared to Mimoko's family, but they will become relevant when the history of Okisato's mother is discussed in a future arc.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Sep 30, 2024

    Author's Commentary #44:

    Time to talk about Chapter 44: The ostracized grandmaster.
    First, let's talk about the aftermath of Kazuya's failed scheme. Kazuya truly was willing to martyr himself. As for the main reason why, he felt that doing so would truly impress Shion. Shion was also on board with the plan and agreed to help frame the chess club.

    However, Kazuya surviving and almost getting arrested ruined the entire plan. After giving their testimonies to the teachers, the chess club was absolved of any involvement in the principal's death. Shion, however, is now in the hot seat for threatening some teachers and students as well as slandering the chess club. And that's all in addition to her now being considered an accomplice in Utami's kidnapping.

    All this is largely thanks to Otona, or rather Okisato telling Otona what to do beforehand. As stated previously in the series, killing someone in a DESPER match won't get you charged for murder. However, since Kazuya kidnapped Utami, he would have been booked on kidnapping charges if Tsar Grigori didn't intervene. Despite this, Shion is now under investigation, nor is Kazuya exactly safe as Tsar Grigori intends to punish him for his failure.

    As for Okisato, he ended up losing the vice-president election in a landslide to Yuusuke. This was largely due to Mimoko turning against him because of him not telling her about the match with Kazuya. Originally, Okisato was going to be the vice president of the chess club, but after I ended up writing this mini-arc, I felt it would be better to have him become ostracized due to the Kazuya incident and lose to Yuusuke.

    However, Okisato doesn't take the loss well and in the revision of this chapter, I decided to showcase one of the games he played against Yuusuke. The game is actually the infamous 9-move mate game that was played between Fabiano Caruana and Alireza Firouzja in the Crunchlabs Masters 2024. In the game, Firouzja ended up falling for what some dub, "the 100 year old trick" which allowed Caruana to achieve a winning position as white. Firouzja resigned after realizing this. Funnily enough, Firouzja ended up bouncing back from the loss and made it to the grand finals of the event. As for why the game is called "the 100 year old trick", that's due to the same rook sacrifice plan being used, albeit in a slightly different way, in a game between Carl Schlechter and Julius Perlis in 1911. I decided to extend the game and show one of the possible ways to mate.

    This game was not present in the original version of the chapter though and is thus the 1st new game to be added in the revisions. Though it will only be one of 2 brand new games added in the revisions. And with this game, the [Game log]'s numbering is now back on track.

    One final thing I'll mention is the the title. If my original pre-revision comment is still up, you'll notice the chapter was actually titled, "Striving for improvement". "The ostracized grandmaster" was actually the title for the original Chapter 46, now chapter 47 post revision, however, I decided to flip the titles around in order to better reflect the themes of their respective chapters.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Sep 30, 2024

    Author's Commentary #43:

    Time to discuss Chapter 43: Caïssa's blessing
    Caïssa is known as the goddess of chess. As such, I felt I needed to make reference to her in the story, and what better way than via the Caïssa's blessing function of the WWCF card.

    As explained in the chapter, this feature prevents holders of it from dying due to unnatural causes. For example, Svetlana has it which allows her to function as an invincible one-woman army. As such, she's often tasked by her father to eliminate his foes as Caïssa's blessing prevents weapons from harming her. The blessing is even capable of allowing it's holder to survive a direct hit from a nuke, with no side-effects whatsoever. However, it cannot prevent holders from dying of old age, natural causes, or from the losing conditions of a DESPER battle.

    Now is also a good time to confirm everyone that has appeared thus far in the story that has Caïssa's blessing. Okisato, Mimoko, Peter, Tsar Grigori, Svetlana, Hagemi, Raymond Redfield, Kuon, all have it. All the maestros and SPCMs have it too even though some SPCMs are rated under 2000. Gyro also had the blessing when he was alive.

    Reaching a rating of 2000 alone though doesn't actually grant users the blessing. Talent and potential tend to be the biggest factors though achieving a rating of over 2500 guarantees someone will get the blessing. I actually have plans to further explore Caïssa's blessing and the DESPERs in future seasons of the story so look forward to that.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Sep 30, 2024

    Author's Commentary #42:

    Time to talk about Chapter 42: The mad tsar.
    And what better topic to discuss than the mad tsar himself, Grigori Ivan Vasilyevich I. He's one of the higher-ups in the Desperado league and is Svetlana's father as well as the leader of Russia. He came to power by winning a DESPER match and as such, decided that upon becoming the new leader of Russia, he would bring back the monarchy. Thus, his official royal title is Grigori Ivan Vasilyevich the 1st of Russia. He is actually descended from one of Ivan the terrible's illegitimate children though, and as such, bears royal blood.

    Speaking of which, Tsar Grigori draws heavy inspiration from Ivan the terrible.
    Григо́рий Иван Васильевич I (Grigori Ivan Vasilyevich I) is how his name is written in Russian, with his middle and last name being spelled the same as Ivan the terrible's.
    グリゴリー・イヴァン・ヴァシレヴィッチ1世
    (Grigori Ivan Vasilyevich I) is how his name would be written in Japanese.
    (If I made any mistakes with the translations, feel free to correct me).

    His rating of 2818 is actually a neat reference to the day Ivan died. The day was March 28th 1584, but O.S. (old style) March 18th 1584. And of course, Ivan infamously died during a chess game. Perhaps that might hold clues to Tsar Grigori's fate in the story.

    His birthday is August 25th which is shared with Ivan the terrible. Fun fact: The birthday was O.S. August 15th.

    As for his favorite piece, it is the king since he himself is tsar of Russia.

    Grigori's introduction originally occurred in Chapter 47, but as part of the revisions, I decided to move his introduction up as I felt the story flowed better. I feel his introduction here also showcases his cruelty better and why he's going to be such a major villain in future arcs.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Sep 30, 2024

    Author's Commentary #40:

    Time to discuss Chapter 40: One wrong move.
    This was originally the 42nd chapter, but I decided to move things around as part of my revisions to Season 2 and 3. As such, this chapter now takes place much sooner than before.

    I guess now is a good time to divulge more on Kazuya. He is the student council president and has a knack for politics. However, he is also dating and highly obedient to Shion. He's so loyal to Shion, that he essentially functions as her proxy for controlling the student council behind the scenes.

    The kanji for his full name is 榎 和矢 (Enoki Kazuya). His first name, 和矢, translates to "harmony" and "dart", though also "feces" which is why the principal gave him the name since he believed he was shit, due to not having a knack for shogi. In short, the principal was a piece of shit, which is why Kazuya had no problem killing him.
    (If I made any mistakes with the translations, feel free to correct me).

    His favorite piece is the knight as he views himself as Shion's noble knight.

    Since he's Nagi's older twin brother, he shares his April 6th birthday with him. The two actually got along fairly well, so much so that when Kazuya heard of Nagi's death, he put a plan of vengeance in motion. As for said plan, the principal's death is the first phase of it while phase 2 centers around Utami.

    Speaking of which, Utami's actually been living with Mimoko ever since the bughouse game. As such, they've gotten much closer with each other as no one else in Mimoko's family plays chess.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Sep 27, 2024

    Author's Commentary #210:

    Time to talk about Chapter 210: Empathetic yandere.
    It's been a while since a game was split between two chapters, but I felt it would make a good cliffhanger, so that's why it's happening. Now let's discuss the new characters.

    エミー・ブロードストーン (Emmie Broadstone is how Emmie's name is spelled in katakana.

    Her birthday is June 12th, which is also the day Raiders of the Lost Ark was released.

    Her favorite piece is the queen, mainly due to it being a good number of people's favorite piece.

    クリスタロ・ブロードストーン (Kristalo Broadstone) is how Kristalo's name is spelled in katakana.
    His name is actually Latin for crystal, which makes sense considering he's essentially a living crystal ball.

    His birthday is January 6th. I chose the date at random, so there's no greater significance behind why this day is his birthday.

    He doesn't really play chess, but his favorite piece would probably be the queen.

    シモーネ・ブロードストーン (Simone Broadstone) is how Simone's name is spelled in katakana.

    Her birthday is October 11th. I chose this date at random, so there's no greater significance behind why this day is her birthday.

    Her favorite piece is the pawn, mainly because she tends to view people as pawns.

    One final thing I'll mention is that Caïssa's blessing is the reason Emmie's power didn't affect Skaberghast. Iori has yet to acquire it, which is why she was still vulnerable. It's also becoming more clear how Skaberghast will cement himself as the main villain for the season. While a climatic final battle with him is unlikely, he is clearly showing why he's the main villain of the season, and will only continue to do so in the next chapter.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Sep 26, 2024

    Author's Commentary #209:

    Time to talk about Chapter 209: Chicken bone chaos.
    Just as I hinted in the last commentary, it's Mimoko's time to shine. It's actually kind of hard to believe it's been a while since Mimoko had a proper match. Speaking of which, the match was quick, but it showed how Mimoko dominates with the London System. And speaking of witches, let's talk about Lynessa.

    リネッサ・ブロードストーン (Lynessa Broadstone) is how her name is spelled in katakana. Her name is actually one of the many names given to the Wicked Witch of the West from The Wonderful Wizard of Oz.

    Her birthday is May 17th, which is the day The Wonderful Wizard of Oz was released.

    Her favorite piece is the knight, mainly because it's the closest piece to a chicken.

    To be honest, I only decided to make the Broadstones a family of witches at the last minute, but I'm glad I did. Them being witches adds a bit more creative flair to the story and I enjoy writing the characters too. In fact, I ended up liking some of the characters so much, that I really felt bad about killing them off, but sadly some need to die for the sake of the plot. I'd argue most of the Broadstones will be likeable antagonists, but there will be a few that will be irredeemable.

    Speaking of antagonists, it turns out Skaberghast is on track to be the main villain of the season after all. This will become much clearer in the next few chapters.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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