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Mario Nakano 64

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Jul 15, 2024

Author's Commentary #42:

Time to talk about Chapter 42: Black sail of the labyrinth Part 2.
While the general story of the arc is the same as the original, there are some notable differences. One being that Emeri's flustered emotional state is now much more apparent here.

The big one though is that Eriza will now play a much bigger role in Season 2 as a whole. The conversation with her and Melinda was also remake exclusive and readers will want to remember it for later.

As for the arc itself, it is based off of the Theseus myth from Greek mythology. Though it wasn't properly touched on, the ball of Eriza and Eika's hair was meant to represent the ball of thread Ariadne gave Theseus so he could find his way out of the labyrinth.

If you're familiar with the myth, I'm sure you can understand why Melinda declared Emeri the loser of the game. However, there's also a second and quite infamous Greek mythology reference in this arc. See if you can find it before it's revealed in the next chapter.

That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

Escape:Witch [Remake]

Chapter:42

Jul 14, 2024

Author's Commentary #41:

Time to talk about Chapter 41: Black sail of the labyrinth Part 1.
As highlighted in the previous commentary, major revisions between this and the original have occurred. The first is that the season's main antagonist, Melinda Moriarty, has received both a personality and visual overhaul in terms of her design. Instead of being more melancholic, she's now more edgy and upbeat. I really do like her new personality and design compared to her old one. Speaking of which, let's go over her bio.

メリンダ・モリアーティ (Melinda Moriarty) is how her name is spelled in katakana. She's a highly intelligent woman and has a decent social media following. Her name is also a reference to Professor Moriarty from Sherlock Holmes, and she is actually his descendant.

Her birthday is January 31st, which is both National Backward day and the day before Yuni's birthday.

Now that Melinda's bio is out of the way, it's time to talk about a major change between this and the original, that being Serika doesn't get kidnapped. Looking back, I'm not sure why I decided to have her get kidnapped or how she'd even get kidnapped considering her strength. Even if she did get taken out by the immobilization serum dart, I still didn't want her getting kidnapped, mainly because of what Melinda would try and do to her. However, I also didn't want Serika at full strength as that would make everything a sure win for the girls which is why I had her get hit with the dart in the first place. She actually has built up some immunity to the serum thanks to her training at the mansion, but obviously not enough to resist it completely. While she didn't get kidnapped, she will be completely useless for the arc and will have to be carried around by Madoka since leaving her alone would be too risky. And much to Serika's dismay, her hair will also be styled in twintails until she can move again, courtesy of Yuni.

That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

Escape:Witch [Remake]

Chapter:41

Jul 14, 2024

[Game log #82]

Here are the games from Chapter 139. The first features a Sodium attack/ Durkin opening while the second features a Stafford gambit.

[Event "?"]
[Site "?"]
[Date "????.??.??"]
[Round "?"]
[White "Iori Ishikiridokoro (1344)"]
[Black "SPCM Mariano Mario (1981)"]
[Result "1-0"]

1. Na3 e6 2. e4 d5 3. e5 Bxa3 4. bxa3 Bd7 5. Qg4 c5 6. Qxg7 Ke7 7. Qxh8 Na6 8. Qxh7 Kf8 9. Nf3 Be8 10. Rb1 Qb8 11. Bxa6 bxa6 12. Rxb8 Rxb8 13. Ng5 Rb1 14. O-O c4 15. a4 Ra1 16. Ba3+ Ne7 17. Qh8# 1-0

[Event "?"]
[Site "?"]
[Date "????.??.??"]
[Round "?"]
[White "SPCM Sheila Frisch (800)"]
[Black "Iori Ishikiridokoro (1344)"]
[Result "0-1"]

1. e4 e5 2. Nf3 Nf6 3. Nxe5 Nc6 4. Nxc6 dxc6 5. d3 Bc5 6. Bg5 Nxe4 7. Bxd8 Bxf2+
8. Ke2 Bg4# 0-1

En Passant Grandmaster

Chapter:139

Jul 14, 2024

[Game log #83]

Here are the games from Chapter 140. For the second game, Sheila lost on time.

[Event "?"]
[Site "?"]
[Date "????.??.??"]
[Round "?"]
[White "Iori Ishikiridokoro (1344)"]
[Black "SPCM Mililani Paina (2650)"]
[Result "1-0"]

1. e4 e5 2. Ke2 Ke7 3. d4 exd4 4. Qxd4 Nc6 5. Qc4 d5 6. exd5 Qxd5 7. Qxd5 Kf6 8. Qg5+ Ke6 9. Ke1 Kd6 10. Bf4+ Ne5 11. Qxe5+ Kc6 12. Qb5# 1-0

[Event "?"]
[Site "?"]
[Date "????.??.??"]
[Round "?"]
[White "SPCM Sheila Frisch (800)"]
[Black "Mimoko Inoue (2730)"]
[Result "0-1"]

1. f3 g6 0-1

En Passant Grandmaster

Chapter:140

Jul 14, 2024

[Game log #84]

Here's the game from Chapter 141. It features one of the rarest moves in chess, a doubly disambiguated knight capture mate.

[Event "?"]
[Site "?"]
[Date "????.??.??"]
[Round "?"]
[White "SPCM Sandy Shores (850)"]
[Black "Iori Ishikiridokoro (1344)"]
[Result "0-1"]

1. f4 d5 2. Kf2 d4 3. e4 dxe3+ 4. Kf3 e2 5. g4 exd1=N 6. h4 Nd7 7. Ne2 Nh6 8. Kg2 Nf6 9. Ng3 e6 10. Kh2 Nf2 11. Rg1 e5 12. Bg2 Nf6xg4# 0-1

En Passant Grandmaster

Chapter:141

Jul 14, 2024

[Game log #85]

Here's the game from Chapter 142. I played against Chess.com's 3200-rated level 25 engine bot, with assisted mode on of course, in order to get this game.

[Event "?"]
[Site "?"]
[Date "????.??.??"]
[Round "?"]
[White "Mimoko Inoue (2730)"]
[Black "Maestro Wiley Frisch (3050)"]
[Result "1-0"]

1. b4 e5 2. Bb2 Bxb4 3. Bxe5 Nf6 4. Nc3 Ba5 5. Nf3 d6 6. Bxf6 Qxf6 7. Nd5 Qe6 8. Nf4 Qe7 9. c4 c6 10. e3 O-O 11. Be2 Na6 12. O-O Nc5 13. d4 Ne4 14. Qa4 Qd8 15. Bd3 Re8 16. Qc2 Qe7 17. h3 b6 18. Rfc1 h6 19. Rab1 Bf5 20. d5 c5 21. Ne6 Bxe6 22. Bxe4 Bd7 23. Bh7+ Kh8 24. Bf5 Bxf5 25. Qxf5 Kg8 26. Nh2 Qe4 27. Qxe4 Rxe4 28. Nf1 Ree8 29. g4 g6 30. Ng3 Bd2 31. Rc2 Ba5 32. Kf1 Rad8 33. a3 Kg7 34. Ke2 Re5 35. a4 Rh8 36. f4 Re7 37. Kd3 a6 38. Ra1 Ra8 39. h4 Rae8 40. e4 Ra8 41. h5 Rb7 42. hxg6 fxg6 43. e5 Rf8 44. Ke4 dxe5 45. fxe5 Rbf7 46. Ne2 Rf2 47. d6 Rg2 48. Kd5 Rff2 49. e6 Kf8 50. Nf4 Rxc2 51. Nxg2 Rxg2 52. Rf1+ Kg7 53. d7 b5 54. e7 Rd2+ 55. Kc6 Rd1 56. Rf8 Re1 57. e8=Q Re6+ 58. Kd5 Re5+ 59. Kxe5 Bc7+ 60. Ke4 h5 61. Rg8+ Kh7 62. Qxg6# 1-0

En Passant Grandmaster

Chapter:142

Jul 14, 2024

Author's Commentary #142:

Time to talk about Chapter 142: Mimoko vs Maestro Wiley Frisch.
The final game of Season 3 is here, and it's a showdown between Mimoko and Maestro Frisch. Originally, I actually planned for Wiley to become president, which is why his rating is 3050, in order to reference the fact that he'd be the leader of all 50 US states. However, as I finalized my ideas for the arc, I decided it would be better for him not to.

Wiley was never intended to be a good person. Morally grey at best. However, when I finalized on what his relationship with Sheila would be, I felt he at the least didn't deserve to be rewarded. While it is tragic that his family was killed in a political rally turned violent, it doesn't excuse how he treated Sheila.

Speaking of Sheila, she's now free to do what she wants with her life thanks to a sneaky play by Iori. She's also got friends like Katie who will stick by her side and even push back against the party if they begin to turn on her. However, Clifford being the asshole that he is would turn on her without question if the party deemed her a traitor, which is why he deserved both those kicks he received.

Finally, the next chapter will be the last chapter of season 3. Season 4 won't begin immediately, but instead, I'll be listing my top 10 favorite and least favorite games and characters in the series. You won't want to miss it.

That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

En Passant Grandmaster

Chapter:142

Jul 14, 2024

Author's Commentary #94:

Time to talk about Chapter 94: St. Patrick's day and graduation.
This chapter is very similar to it's original counterpart, however there is one key addition to this chapter; the fact that Rika and Masaru once again have sex. The fact that I'm highlighting this probably tells you that there's some major significance to it.

There is also only one more slice of life chapter left before the headmaster selection arc resumes. I hope you're looking forward to it because that arc is completely remake exclusive and will have great lasting effects on the story.

One final fun fact I'll mention is that in Escape Witch, Jester does attempt to kidnap Madoka again on St. Patrick's day, but is defeated before he could even sing his theme song. Here, I decided to let him sing his tune before he was sent flying off.

That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

Spice of life [Remake]

Chapter:94

Jul 13, 2024

Author's Commentary #141:

Time to talk about Chapter 141: Doubly disambiguated.
Obviously, the inspiration for this chapter comes from Paralogical's "The rarest move in chess" video, where in it, the rarest moves in chess was determined to be a doubly disambiguated bishop capture mate, with a doubly disambiguated knight capture mate being a close second. To clarify, a doubly disambiguated piece is when you have to gie the exact coordinates of the piece you're moving. For example, Rc32b3.

As for the game, it's one of the fastest ways to pull off a doubly disambiguated knight capture mate. If this ever gets a video game adaptation, you can bet there will be achievements for pulling off both doubly disambiguated mates and doubly disambiguated capture mates. And even though Iori's beaten all the SPCMs, she doesn't have enough points to challenge Wiley, meaning Mimoko will be playing him next.

That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

En Passant Grandmaster

Chapter:141

Jul 13, 2024

Author's Commentary #40:

Time to talk about Chapter 40: Really dumb jocks.
I was originally considering cutting the girlfriend joke from the chapter, but decided to keep it both because it is funny and because it highlights just how dumb Eika and Koki are. The two may seem overbearing, but they both mean well.

One thing I do want to talk about is the end of the chapter, particularly the character that appears. This is in fact the character I alluded to that would be getting a complete character overhaul. In the original, she had blonde hair and was essentially a melancholic BOTW Zelda rip-off. Here, she's now an edgy evil streamer girl. The reason for her personality change is because I honestly just didn't like her character at all. After rewriting her though, I like her much more. As for who she is, that will be revealed soon.

That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

Escape:Witch [Remake]

Chapter:40

Jul 13, 2024

Author's Commentary #93:

Time to talk about Chapter 93: White day and pi day.
Once again, this is a chapter that was in the original and like the previous chapter, I don't have much to say about it. It is worth noting that white day always falls on March 14th which is also pi day.

Since it's also pi day, I thought it would be a good idea for Rika to send Himawari a chicken pot pie. In the original, this chapter was less of a slice of life chapter due to the different canon. I guess if I haven't already clarified, the remake is canon while the original no longer is. Since the story is different here, the chapter was more of a slice of life chapter.

That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

Spice of life [Remake]

Chapter:93

Jul 13, 2024

That meat lunch sounds delicious. Hana really knows best when it comes to packing lunches.

Blue Memory

Chapter:5

Jul 13, 2024

The uncle seems like he's gonna be a fun character.

Blue Memory

Chapter:4

Jul 13, 2024

Of course Hana comes to the cafe to tease Yukio.😆

Blue Memory

Chapter:3

Jul 13, 2024

To:Katsuhito

No worries. I'm actually glad this is more of a wholesome story.

Blue Memory

Chapter:1

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