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It's a me. I'm an aspiring light novel writer hoping to one day see my works in anime form. I hope that my works at least brighten up your day and give you something to look forward to.
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Jan 23, 2026
Much better with the formatting here.
Not a fan with the formatting of this chapter. I can get what you're going for, but the narration shouldn't be boldened.
Every time I see the perspective change cue for Jesse, I think Walter White is speaking.
Is that Dracula on the current cover?
You really seem to know your tanks. I honestly have little to no knowledge on what kinds of tanks there are. To me, everything's just plain, tank.
Iced shell.
Good battle.
Oh, I thought this would kick off a running joke where Hannah effortlessly beats kaiju.
That Kaiju was subjected to Fairy Tail levels of fodderization.
To:Anime lover
Hmm, I didn't see it, but then again, it could be for something in a later chapter. Also, props for wanting to rewrite this. Sometimes it might seem like a chore, but rewriting can yield both a better storytelling experience, and joy in writing. I've had lots of fun rewriting some of my stories.
More so the vagueness of it, like I'm getting he's probably the result of time travel shenanigans, but how that came to be is the mystery.
Yeah, that's probably it. His backstory will probably explain everything.
Hanz, stop confusing me with your inner thoughts.
Well, can't say the chapter title didn't warn me about what was in store.
Hanz's inner monologues are consistent in the fact that they confuse me.