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Mario Nakano 64

It's a me. I'm an aspiring light novel writer hoping to one day see my works in anime form. I hope that my works at least brighten up your day and give you something to look forward to.

registered at: Jun 30, 2023

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Sep 14, 2025

No rain does suck. The sound and scenic value of it are what makes it so calming.

I Got Summoned to Hell to Grant a Demon’s Wish?!

Chapter:17

Sep 14, 2025

I'm still going to say Grace has some dark past, though with the knowledge we now have, maybe it was just bad, but not pure evil.

I Got Summoned to Hell to Grant a Demon’s Wish?!

Chapter:16

Sep 14, 2025

Wonder what the markets will be like.

I Got Summoned to Hell to Grant a Demon’s Wish?!

Chapter:15

Sep 14, 2025

The mindfuckery with the devil's assistant. That guy really is bad news.

I Got Summoned to Hell to Grant a Demon’s Wish?!

Chapter:14

Sep 14, 2025

Now that I'm more attuned to the Beauty and the Beast vibes, I can't unsee them or get them out of my mind when I'm reading this.

I Got Summoned to Hell to Grant a Demon’s Wish?!

Chapter:13

Sep 14, 2025

I know this is late, but Happy 2-year anniversary to this series.

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Life Stream: Helping a cute girl gain views and followers

Chapter:1

Sep 14, 2025

Thank goodness the formatting's back to normal. As for my thoughts on the game, I feel it could have been done without the constant emphasis on the clock. If the time control was much lower, then yes, it would make sense, but both players had over 10 minutes on their clocks and were never in any real time trouble. The game by itself is solid though.

And now I just realized this is the latest chapter, so review time. As someone who also writes a chess novel, I feel my grading system might be a bit harsher compared to others, or more lenient in a sense as well. You've got a great premise, but sadly with this being the latest chapter, there isn't really much else to go off. There are many mysteries and potential face offs you could explore in future volumes, but with what's currently available, the story as a whole feels incomplete.

In terms of the games, you currently have just two, but sadly both suffered for a few reasons. The first game was more so just a minor gripe with me not liking how you were explaining how the notation works while the game was ongoing, but with the second one, the bad formatting completely ruined the experience. Luckily, some proper formatting is all I think you'd need to do to fix that game. I'm not sure if you'll ever return to this series, but if you do, know that you've got a good premise for any future plot lines.

Spirit Chess

Chapter:19

Sep 14, 2025

No! The bad formatting makes it so hard to read! I want to see how this game is playing out properly.

Spirit Chess

Chapter:18

Sep 14, 2025

Oh boy, the formatting is completely messed up here. I'd highly advise reformatting it so the chapter is easier to read especially considering the game is starting now.

Spirit Chess

Chapter:17

Sep 14, 2025

Maybe it's because I watch too many high-profile tournaments, but when it comes to professional play, boards and pieces are always provided by the venue, most likely to keep things uniform and prevent the off chance of someone trying to cheat via custom pieces.

Spirit Chess

Chapter:16

Sep 14, 2025

To:kazesenken

Best part of this statement is Tentacled v2 confirmed. Though seriously, writing this with the pretense that it could serve as a guide of sorts for others is an amazing thing to do. That puts this entire novel in a whole new light.

Time and Time Again

Chapter:30

Sep 14, 2025

To:Moe Tie

I've been enjoying the story so far. As for reading, I tend to do most of my reading via desktop, so I'm not aware of all the formatting differences between it and mobile. Thanks for letting me know about it though.

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Our Perfect Isekai World is Spoiled by a Demon Girl?!

Chapter:20

Sep 14, 2025

Kinoshita shouldn't be so shocked. Gambling the chess club in a game of chess was the only possible way to even have a chance of saving it.

Spirit Chess

Chapter:15

Sep 14, 2025

I like this line of thinking. Want to get the chess club approved? Beat the necessary parties at chess and make them approve it.

Spirit Chess

Chapter:14

Sep 14, 2025

Well of course he must have misheard him. He's a human, not a fan. Sorry, I had to make the joke.

Spirit Chess

Chapter:13