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Mario Nakano 64

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Feb 07, 2026

[Game log #382]

Here's the game from Chapter 708 between Pnina and Yuusuke. It features a Queen's Gambit Declined: Baltic, Queen Attack. The queen trap here really was the big highlight of the game.

[Event "N/A"]
[Site "Shibuya City, Tokyo"]
[Date "2025.01.17"]
[Round "N/A"]
[White "Yuusuke Shousen (1901)"]
[Black "Pnina Sapir (2016)"]
[Result "0-1"]
[Link "https://www.chess.com/analysis"]

1. d4 d5 2. c4 Bf5 3. Qb3 e5 4. Qxb7 Nd7 5. dxe5 d4 6. Nd2 Rb8 7. Qd5 Bc5 8. e4 Ne7 9. e6 fxe6 10. Qxd7+ Qxd7 11. exf5 d3 12. Bxd3 Qxd3 13. fxe6 Rf8 14. b4 Bxf2+ 15. Kd1 Nf5 16. Bb2 Ne3+ 17. Kc1 Qc2# 0-1

En Passant Grandmaster

Chapter:708

Feb 07, 2026

Author's Commentary #708:

Time to talk about Chapter 708: Queen fishing.
Not the most creative title, but at least it's a proper chapter. Yuusuke has to fight for his chance at joining the team, but he gives in to the jobber side and botches it.

The game was actually played against Chess.com's 1800-rated Snowboarder bot, and in a single go, no less. I had originally been playing against other bots, but getting longer games, even trying to craft the game myself with engine help. The latter ended up morphing into a game I'll likely use for Volume 5 and port back over here, thus leading me to seek the bots. The queen trap and quick mate were the big factors that led me to go with the game.

Though I was able to get this game done, I feel I still won't be jumping into the thick of the Global League yet. That being said, there is an idea I've had for this series that I've wanted to do for a while, and ironically enough, Mr. Filler could be used to advance said idea.

That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

En Passant Grandmaster

Chapter:708

Feb 06, 2026

Hmm, I'm honestly not a fan of full Japanese quotes, as it feels like an immersion breaker. Of course, I'm usually going in assuming the language spoken is Japanese and that the English text is just for reader convenience, rather than the cannonical language being spoken.

Tea Room at the Edge of the Galaxy

Chapter:6

Feb 06, 2026

Almost missed this, but glad I took a look at the full chapter list.

Chess Madness

Chapter:1

Feb 06, 2026

To:kazesenken

I've never read or watched Danmachi aside from I think just the first episode, so I have no idea what it's like. That might be why I'm reacting more positively to this than you might expect.

Atk 0 Crit All ~My attack stat is negligible, so I can't help but rely on critical hits to succeed!~

Chapter:4

Feb 06, 2026

Author's Commentary #707:

Time to talk about Chapter 707: Mr. Filler is back.
He's back again, because I just can't write. That being said, he'll likely have his chapters replaced once I complete the Season, or rather reshuffled to the back.

Honestly, I feel I'll do Mr. Filler chapters until I'm able to write the story proper, then once said story is done, just swap those chapters with the Mr. Filler ones. That all being said, I will be doing things for the series' 2-year anniversary on the 19th, so look out for that stuff.

That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

En Passant Grandmaster

Chapter:707

Feb 06, 2026

Love the diving art. Please do more illustrations.

Face of Eternity : The Journey of a Little Angel

Chapter:75

Feb 06, 2026

To:Anime lover

At the start of every dialogue.

Final Chapter: POST FUTURE SAGA

Chapter:45

Feb 06, 2026

Noticed a lot of capitalization errors in this one. Anyway, I'm all caught up.

Final Chapter: POST FUTURE SAGA

Chapter:45

Feb 06, 2026

Well that got dark with Samantha's family.

Hazel the mentor

Chapter:4

Feb 06, 2026

To:Anime lover

Everything here is spaced out way too much. The gaps between paragraphs is too much.

Final Chapter: POST FUTURE SAGA

Chapter:40

Feb 05, 2026

Since you asked for thoughts on the future arc, I'll give you some critique. Throughout most of it, I was confused. Time travel shenanigans are generally frowned upon because they can get confusing if not pulled off right, which sadly I feel is the case here. The other thing I feel wasn't explained well was Hanz's monologues about Shu. That, and there was also numerous formatting issues. Needless to say, if you want to make this work, you'll have a lot of revising ahead of you.

Final Chapter: POST FUTURE SAGA

Chapter:44

Feb 05, 2026

Well that was a sudden transition.

Final Chapter: POST FUTURE SAGA

Chapter:43

Feb 05, 2026

So Hannah's real name is Khali?

Final Chapter: POST FUTURE SAGA

Chapter:42

Feb 05, 2026

Really good fight scenes here.

Final Chapter: POST FUTURE SAGA

Chapter:41

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