Mario Nakano 64

Mario Nakano 64

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    Nov 26, 2025

    Author's Commentary #22:

    Time to talk about Chapter 22: A prodigy in the making.
    This chapter gives us the first proper look at Okisato and Mimoko going all out. It also illustrates that just like in the real world, blunders are more prone to occur the faster the playing speed is.

    Now let's discuss the chess club. They've expanded their roster from 5 members to 10. However, only 8 of them will really be getting the spotlight in the story.

    As for the other two, their names are Zago-kun (座吾) and Azenira-chan (畔蒜 ).
    座吾 translates to "seat" and "myself" while 畔蒜 translates to "shore" and "perennial plant of the lily family".
    (If I made any mistakes with the translations, feel free to correct me).

    As for why they only have surnames, both were made with the intention that if this series ever got a video game adaptation, they'd be the player characters. As a result, their first names would be chosen by the player.

    Azenira and Zago won't have a major role in the story, until Season 7's adaptation, but even then, their roles could summarized as glorified cameos. And as for how things would work out plot-wise if the novel ever did get a video game adaptation, they'd essentially follow the chess club around and be fully controllable during tournaments. They wouldn't hijack the story though, simply being present for moments everyone plays in a game and watching events like the Okisato-Inojin game from a distance.

    Though going more into a potential video game adaptation, you would still be able to play as characters like Okisato for story battles. Speaking of which, I'd also make sure all the story matches (Okisato vs Inojin, Iori vs Cypress, Yuusuke vs Zanni, the bughouse game, etc.) have secret cut-scenes and dialogue if you play the games EXACTLY like they are in the story. This would only be a feature of story mode though.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Nov 26, 2025

    Author's Commentary #21:
    Time to talk about Chapter 21: WWCF cards.
    The primary purpose of this chapter was to talk about the WWCF cards. Since this was written before I rewrote some of the earlier chapters, this was originally going to be the giant info dump chapter on the WWCF cards. However, all this chapter really ended up doing was revealing that they can allow their holders to earn money from winning battles. Part of my mentality for doing that is that if this novel were to ever get a video game adaptation, the banking feature would essentially function similar to how you get money from winning battles in Pokemon games. I also thought it would be better to gradually reveal some of the features of the WWCF cards rather than dump everything all at once, so look forward to more reveals about the card's features in future chapters. Finally, let's discuss Syouma Numakawa.

    沼川 將誠 (Numakawa Syouma) is how his name would be spelled in kanji. 將誠 means "to almost be" and "fact", which is fitting since he's part of the science club. 沼川 on the other hand, translates to "swamp river".
    (If I made any mistakes with the translations, feel free to correct me).

    His birthday is June 13th, which he shares with Lorenz Hellman Gloucester from Fire Emblem Three Houses.

    Like Maida, he feels the queen is the most versatile piece on the board.

    He's actually skilled at programming, but also very arrogant. Funnily enough, the greatest influence for his character is actually Lorenz Hellman Gloucester from Fire Emblem Three Houses.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Nov 26, 2025

    Author's Commentary #20:

    Time to talk about Chapter 20: Chess experiment.
    This chapter essentially served as a way to help spread word of the chess club throughout the school, and establish Maida as the supervising teacher for it. As such, I decided that it would be fitting for her to have her class do an experiment related to chess. The experiment is essentially seeing what the most common moves are amongst the class. Though when class reconvenes, the students will play each other from the 1. e4 Nf6 position so look forward to that in Volume 2.

    Finally, the big secret regarding Hagemi is out; she's the top female chess player in the world, publicly at least. I'll talk more about her background later, so for now, we'll just go over some basic trivia about her.

    承先 励美 (Shousen Hagemi) is how her name would be spelled in kanji, with her first name, 励美, translating to "Inspire" and "beautiful". Now remember how I said way back in Author's Commentary #3 that 承先 can mean "first"? That's why I chose it to be Yuusuke and Hagemi's surname as Hagemi is currently the number 1 female chess player in the world.
    (If I made any mistakes with the translations, feel free to correct me).

    Her birthday is March 31st which she shares with Koneru Humpy, an Indian grandmaster and one of the top female chess players of all time.

    Her favorite piece is the rook. Initially, she thought rooks were lousy, but quickly found how valuable they are in the endgame, which led to them becoming her favorite piece.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Nov 26, 2025

    Author's Commentary #19:

    Time to talk about Chapter 19: Feline fanatic.
    First thing's first, Kuon was originally supposed to be a much larger antagonist, but I couldn't think of what to do with her, so I relegated her to that of a minor one. As such, this chapter originally served to build her up as a messed up villain, but since I decided to change course, I ended up rewriting Kuon to make her more of a scientist. That being said, in the volume revisions, her role will be a tad more significant compared to the original.

    南谷 九怨 (Nanya Kuon) is how her name is spelled in kanji. Her first name, 九怨, translates to "nine" and "resentment", which is fitting for her character. Her last name, 南谷, means "South" and "ravine". It also has "nya" in it which is why I chose it.

    Her birthday is August 8th, which is International Cat Day. As for why she prefers catgirls over cats, she just does. Catpeople are her fetish.

    Her favorite piece is the queen, mainly because she herself believes she is the queen of chess. She was actually a child prodigy, but ended up getting upstaged when her eventual rival and world's highest rated female player, Hagemi, entered the scene.

    I'll also talk a bit about Nyogaku Nakano. Like Kuon, I originally planned for her to have a larger role, but for now she'll be a minor character.

    中埜 如岳 (Nakano Nyogaku) is how her name is written in kanji. Her first name,
    如岳 means "similar to" and "peak". Her last name, 中埜 means "inside" and "field". It is an obvious nod to the the Nakano quintuplets from the Quintessential Quintuplets. Though funnily enough, the character that largely inspired Nyogaku was actually Sahara Wakasa from Mato Seihei no Slave.
    (If I made any mistakes with the translations, feel free to correct me).

    Her birthday is December 4th. I originally wanted to make her birthday the same as Sahara's but decided to go with something a bit more creative as Sahara debuted in the 12th chapter of the manga and the 4th episode of the anime.
    Her favorite piece is the bishop because she likes how they go whoosh on the diagonals.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Nov 26, 2025

    Author's Commentary #18:

    Time to talk about Chapter 18: A woman of science.
    First off, let's briefly touch on the now bald catgirl, Nyoan. One thing I've always wondered about catgirls is if they have two sets of ears. That's why I decided to answer that question and found out they do indeed have both human and cat ears, or at least Nyoan does. Even though she was subjected to a full-head wax, her hair has a small chance of growing back naturally. However, since Okisato simply made her punishment "losing all her hair and fur", she could challenge someone to a DESPER battle and have her prize for winning be her hair and fur growing back. Of course, Nyoan is probably not smart enough to think of that herself.

    Now let's move on to Okisato's 27-year old teacher, Mayana Maida. She's a woman of science and is highly intelligent. She draws heavy inspiration from Sae Chabashira from Classroom of the Elite.

    毎田 万夜奈 (Maida Mayana) is how her name is spelled in kanji. Her first name, 万夜奈, can translate to "ten thousand", "night", and "fruit tree". Her last name, 毎田, means "always" and "rice field".
    (If I made any mistakes with the translations, feel free to correct me).

    Her birthday is March 14th which she shares with German-born theoretical physicist, Albert Einstein. Believe it or not, Einstein did play chess from time to time so this can technically count as a chess related birthday as well.

    Even though she's just now picking up chess, she's determined that the queen is by far one of the more useful pieces on the board, and thus that could be considered her favorite piece, which is a bit ironic considering she was trapped in one, but it could also be argued that the incident gave her an up close look at how useful the queen is.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Nov 26, 2025

    Author's Commentary #17:

    Time to talk about Chapter 17: Pawn and two moves odds.
    First off, let's discuss odds chess. Odds are a form of handicaps players might implement to make games more interesting and/or give weaker players a better chance of beating them. The odds used for this chapter, pawn and two moves, means white gets to start by making two moves in a row and black is down their f-pawn. As for why it's always the f-pawn, removing any other pawn can actually give the player an advantage by opening up a file for a rook if it's the a- pawn or h-pawn, the diagonals for the bishop if it's the b-pawn or g-pawn, the diagonals for the queen if its the c-pawn or e-pawn (though Two pawns odds removes the c-pawn in addition to the f-pawn), and removing the d-pawn opens the file for the queen and a diagonal for a bishop. Removing the f-pawn offers no such advantage and instead leaves the king vulnerable to an attack diagonally, which is exactly what happened in this game.

    As for the DESPER, it factors in how disadvantaged the player with the odds is, and lessens the severity of the punishment accordingly. Had Nyoan implemented queen and move odds, Okisato wouldn't have died if he lost. However, the punishment for the player that isn't handicapped are never lessened regardless of the odds implemented.

    Odds can only be triggered if the one activating the DESPER, or the person the DESPER holder activated their DESPER for, is rated 1000 points lower than their opponent. This means that DESPER holders that are higher-rated than their opponent can't implement odds both for their opponent, or themself. Naturally, the higher-rated opponent can simply refuse to participate which would deactivate the DESPER for the day.

    Now onto the game itself. This was very fun to write mainly due to the fact that Okisato also had to avoid losing his queen to prevent Maida from dying. The concept of trapping people in pieces is a relatively new discovery for the Desperado league, with only Nyoan and a few others being aware of it. However, in order to force someone to be trapped in a piece, the victim must be rated 500 points lower than the one who activates the DESPER, and can only be placed within a piece if they are restrained beforehand and if the the Desperado playing is rated the same as or lower than their opponent.

    Getting back to the game, Nyoan was completely outwitted by Okisato. She did try to attack Maida a couple of times, but since Maida was in a queen, Okisato could defend her much easier than if she was in a pawn.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Nov 26, 2025

    Author's Commentary #14:

    Time to talk about Chapter 14: Bughouse brawl.
    Now is the time to talk about both the principal and Nagi, whom were both introduced in Chapter 1. First off, both are actually named Nagi Enoki, however, the kanji for their names is different. The principal's name is 渚, which translates to "anxiety", while Nagi's name, 梛, means "evergreen tall tree". Their names were chosen in reference to Nagi Umino from A Couple of Cuckoos.
    (If I made any mistakes with the translations, feel free to correct me).

    Nagi's birthday is April 6th, which is shared with Nagi Umino of A Couple of Cuckoos. The principal's is November 13th, which is shared with Mami Namai from Rent-a-Girlfriend.

    As for Nagi, he's the president of the shogi club as well as a 5-dan in shogi. Nagi is actually a twin and has an older brother named Kazuya. Originally, their names were flipped, but changed after Nagi was shown to be more skilled at shogi than Kazuya. The principal also gave Kazuya a scar to better distinguish the two, and treated him much like he did Utami until his political talents came to bloom.

    The principal, believe it or not, is a 1-dan in shogi despite his poor chess skills. He is also very wealthy, but seeks to gain more wealth and power.

    The bughouse game against the shogi club was actually one of the first major events I had planned for the story. It was originally going to take place before the Cypress and Zanni confrontation, but I felt jumping into the bughouse before the confrontation wouldn't flow as well, so I pushed it back, which ended up working out real well. Another reason I wanted to do a bughouse game was because I wanted to have the punishment for the losers be getting zapped with a giant bug zapper. For some reason, I always think of a giant bug zapper whenever I hear the term "bughouse", thus I felt it was fitting to have the room turn into a giant bug zapper and for the losers to be electrocuted to death.

    Now let's discuss what bughouse is. Bughouse a two player variation of chess that allows you to use pieces captured by your teammate. You are allowed to drop a piece that can check or mate, and unlike in shogi you can drop a pawn on the same file that contains a pawn of the same color, and drop a pawn to checkmate. You can't however, drop a pawn on the 1st or 8th ranks. Conversing with your teammate is also permitted, making this more of a strategy game.

    The game itself was by far one of the harder ones I had to write as I essentially had to create everything from scratch and get the piece drops right. However, the effort was worth it. This is by far one of my favorite games in the series.

    "Despite that, I doubt I'll ever do a bughouse game again, but I might consider doing a Crazyhouse game, which is a single player variant of Bughouse, in the future." were my words when I originally wrote this commentary out back in April of last year, but now I can confirm that there are more bughouse games in the series, but they just won't show up until Season 7 gets adapted into volume format.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Nov 26, 2025

    Author's Commentary #13:

    Time to talk about Chapter 13: Skewer.
    First off, let's explain the title. In chess, a skewer occurs when two pieces in a line are under attack, however, unlike a pin in which a lower valued piece is under attack and the higher valued piece is behind it, the higher valued piece is under attack while the lower valued piece is behind it. This means that many will choose to move the higher valued piece to safety, and forsake the lower valued piece.

    Now let's talk about the trio of bullies. First up is the leader of the group, Shion Segawa. She takes heavy inspiration from Shiho Manabe from Classroom of the elite, but draws her name from Sion of My Instant Death Ability Is So Overpowered and Hiro Segawa of A couple of cuckoos. The kanji for her name is 背川 姫媛 (Segawa Shion). Her first name, 姫媛, means "noblewoman", which is certainly what she is considering she's the prefectural governor's daughter. Speaking of which, her mother's name, 志歩, means "ambition" and "walk". As for their last name, 背川, it means "betray" and "river".

    Both also share the same birthday of February 21st. I initially wanted them to have the same birthday as Shiho Manabe, but since she doesn't have one listed, I instead went with the day that Season 3 episode 8 of the Classroom of the Elite anime aired.

    Both hers and her mother's favorite piece would be the queen.

    Originally, I had bigger plans for Shion, but for now, she'll just be more of a minor antagonist.

    Speaking of Shiho Manabe, the blue-haired girl, is named Mami Manabe in reference to both her and Mami Nanami from Rent-a-Girlfriend. 曲直部 万美 (Manabe Mami) is how her name is spelled in kanji. Her first name, 万美, means "ten thousand" and "beautiful". Her last name, 曲直部, can translate to "wrong or unjust", "honest", and "group".

    Her birthday is May 2nd, which is the same as Hiro Sewaga's from A Couple of Cuckoos.

    Her favorite piece is the queen.

    She is actually one of the school's top shogi players and is also the daughter of an influential politician.

    The final bully, Kigyoku Gyakui, doesn't actually draw her name from anime characters I hate. 逆井 嬉玉 (Gyakui Kigyoku) is how her name is spelled in kanji. Her first name, 嬉玉, can translate to "happiness" and "ball", which is a nod to her status as the top striker of the soccer team. Her last name, 逆井, can mean "to oppose" and "water hole".
    (If I made any mistake with the translations, feel free to correct me).

    Her birthday is January 23rd, which is the same as Kikyō Kushida's from Classroom of the elite.

    Her favorite piece is the queen.

    Like the other members of the trio, she'll likely just be a minor antagonist for now.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Nov 26, 2025

    Author's Commentary #11:

    Time to talk about Chapter 11: DESPER
    That means, we're discussing the DESPERs. There are still many mysteries surrounding them, so I won't divulge too much about them. Rather, I'll clarify some things about them. First, they can't be used against fellow Desperado league members or DESPER holders. A Desperado can however activate their DESPER in order to allow a lower-rated teammate to challenge someone.

    DESPER holders can also force people into matches they aren't participating in so long as they have the highest rating amongst everyone. However, the one that activated the DESPER will not be dragged into any wagers if they themselves aren't playing. If they try to, the DESPER will simply tell them the request is invalid.

    DESPERs can also force people with the exact same rating as the DESPER holder into a battle. Due to it being so structured around ratings, it is required to be a WWCF member and have a proper rating in order to wield one.

    One final thing I'll mention is that the DESPERs are surprisingly very fair. They completely prevent cheating which is why the WWCF allows the use of them. A good example of its fairness was in the game with Cypress, as it prevented the match from starting until Iori was capable of playing. DESPERs will always ensure players are in a shape that they can comfortably move pieces before the game actually begins, and if they aren't, it'll grant them a state for the match. It's also impossible for anyone to die during a DESPER match before the game ends in draw or mate. Now had Iori lost consciousness on her own during the match, the timer wouldn't have paused as now, things would have been all on Iori.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Nov 26, 2025

    Author's Commentary #9:

    Time to talk about Chapter 9: Psychopath.
    First off, Cypress. He's dead. And that's it. In all honesty, Cypress' whole point was to be a throwaway villain. This is why I had no problem making him as scummy as he is.

    His name could be written as シプレス・シカモア (Cypress Sycamore) in katakana.

    His birthday is January 13th and his favorite piece is the king. Originally, his birthday was March 7th, but after learning that March 7th is the birthday of Alexandre Deschapelles, whom was regarded as one of the greatest chess players of the early 19th century, I decided to change it. The reason being that I felt Cypress wasn't deserving of sharing his birthday with one of the greatest chess players of his era and because I decided to base a different character off of Dechapelles, so naturally I want this character to have the March 7th birthday. Cypress' new birthday was chosen at random. I wouldn't be surprised if many of the random birthdays I chose for some of the characters are also the birthdays of famous chess players, however, I likely won't change anymore birthdays.

    To elaborate a bit more on why Cypress dislikes women so much, he's encountered his fair share of crafty women which is why he's always wary of them. This eventually led to him hating women, and seeking to make their lives miserable. In short, he's the kind that would discriminate against women, but never underestimate them. Of course, that doesn't mean women still can't outwit him, which is exactly what happened here.

    Now we'll discuss both the game, and the big twist of the chapter. Iori is an ex-murderer. She became addicted to the thrill of killing without getting caught at a young age, and ended up murdering thousands both for personal pleasure and monetary support. This led her to develop a high intellect, which she usually hides behind a foolish persona. Not once has she ever been caught, nor do the authorities suspect her, which highlights her terrifying talent. However, one day, she stopped killing and swore to herself to never kill again.

    To go back to Iori's character bio, her true persona is why her birthday is April 1st. There are also some hints in her name that allude to her true nature a a killer, mainly her last name, 石切所, which contains the kanji for "cut"/"slice" which is certainly something Iori did a lot of when murdering people.
    (If I made any mistakes with the translations, feel free to correct me).

    As for the game, it was, you guessed it, another me vs the Chess.com bots original. I decided to theme the chapter around this game after realizing it had all the necessary qualities to make Iori's big reveal all the more thematic.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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