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I'm very interested in Manga and LN. I think good writing is beautiful and I'd like to learn to write a great and impactful story!
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Jul 26, 2023
To:Deleted User
Thank you, I'm not the best at grammar as you can tell lol.
To:Ayli
I don't really do the whole 'friends' thing to be honest. I apologize.
I didn't catch that mistake. Thank you! It should be fixed now.
Jul 25, 2023
To:minatika
It has not been mentioned yet. 😁
I'm gonna try to do that and like alternate between points of view.
I read 'I want to eat your pancreas' today and almost forgot to update. I think this chapter is a bit dry, but I tried to include Suma's POV as I don't think I've done that yet.
Jul 24, 2023
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Jul 23, 2023
this made me laugh
So I changed the title and cover aswell as chapter 0 and a few chapter titles. the story is still the same. My idea now is that Toyo fits as more of a main character but his story would have ended already. And while Kazou had been a side character in Toyo's story Toyo is now one in his? If there are any inconsistencies in the story now please let me know. All feedback is appreciated. and I apologize for the inconvenience. I hope all of this makes sense.
Yeah I may alter the title.
Jul 22, 2023
Kazou is the main character of this story but my idea was to portray Toyo as a main character type? idk if that makes sense. I'm trying my best to make this work, but this is my first time really writing to be honest. I apologize for disappointing. And thank you for the feedback, I will try to improve.
Jul 20, 2023
I also make alot of typos lol 😂
Jul 19, 2023
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Thank you for the feed back, I appreciate it alot! and I'm trying to make kazou as real as possible haha
For anyone interested: I do plan on developing Toyo more as "The Main character" in future chapters. I know so far the "Main Character's Bestfriend" part hasn't been as obvious but I do plan on making this an important part of the story.
