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Hello Everyone! I'm a lover of all things horror, and can't go a day without writing or reading! My dream is to be a published author, so hopefully being on Honeyfeed will help. Thanks in advance for reading my work!
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Oct 13, 2023
I loved the twist at the end linking it back to the source material! Very well done!
It feels like I'm reading a mix between a poem, and one of the classic fantasy stories. The world felt alive, but I do wish we knew what happened to Emily. It feels like there's supposed to be more, but very well done!
Oct 10, 2023
It should be illegal to end on a cliffhanger that good! I really enjoyed the story so far. I did notice that some words are written in the wrong tense, and there are typos in every chapter. But the plot is amazing! If you get a beta reader, or give yourself time to read it with fresh eyes, then you could catch the typos! I look forward to seeing how Max and his friends deal with the monster, or die trying.
So, the monster can attack people outside of the friend group. Very interesting. I can't wait to see what happens next!
One down! This chapter was really great, but putting more space between scenes, and pov switches would have made it easier to read. Very well done!
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Thank you for writing it. Good luck with the contest!
Oct 09, 2023
This was so good! I could see the source material through your work clearly. It's a wonderful bittersweet type of story. Very well done!
Thank you very much! For some reason, that was the first idea that came to mind. After reading and watching the music videos.
Oct 08, 2023
And just like that, Max has become a true horror mc. Ignore the obvious signs and will soon pay the price! I love it!
This was adorable and corny in all the best ways! I feel like I'm reading something from the 80s! Very well done!
This was a really great start! I love the blend of real monsters, and horror lover themes.