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Hello fans my name is Richardo Smith and my company is ehanso. I’m a aspiring writer looking to have his book turned into a manga then into an anime and I hope you’d love to follow me along this journey of boundless hopes and flawless dreams.
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Aug 18, 2020
To:Ana Fowl
For the final copy I think I will flush this scene out some more but at the time when I wrote this I didn’t know what else to do or how to change things
Aug 17, 2020
Thanks I’m really focused on growing and this characters introduction is one of the most important ones
Aug 13, 2020
Lol oh I think this one might be an misunderstanding. I wanted to write an in line transition like how one would see an moon turn into an eye in an anime the blood drop turned into rain which they were blocking hmmmm maybe I should work on that part
Aug 10, 2020
The 5 lol their insanely strong
Aug 09, 2020
I can't wait either the school is cut throat and gets right down to business with overpaid teachers lol
Aug 08, 2020
So this chapter has some poetry to it which is a nice touch so far this is my favorite chapter it caught my attention at the beginning and managed to maintain that flow. Especially I didn’t think her dream was a dream. The insanity is really nice you could feel it adds weight to the character. My only comment for your chapters is length but that’s a me thing lol I like short reads this main character is going to continue struggling its written all over this chapter ooo.
I’m really glad it felt great as a transition I worried that ziggy was such a strong piece people wouldn’t let go lol
Aug 07, 2020
Omg the future is slap grim and fun I hope you continue to enjoy. But in chapter 4 I throw power balance out the window
Aug 06, 2020
I enjoyed this chapter quite a bit her brother is rather amazing at doing the bare minimum lol. He’s my favorite so far. Her friends and the school environment felt lively. But most of all her being in denial at the end over everything that just happened was great
It most definitely is and yeah as I was writing that chapter I felt worried writing it
Aug 04, 2020
Your detailing is very high you build your world from the ground up and I can appreciate that. I also like the fact that your higher being acts like one and isn’t attached to his creations. They seem very believable. Overall great build up. I can’t wait to see how you develop it
Lol yeah my prologue chapters need some reworking but the main story maintains a better flow and becomes far more understandable
Jun 29, 2020
First I would like To start off by saying that this is a very heartwarming story and the road that the president please is extremely well done the fact that the script that she had created didn’t have the meaning behind it that they thought it would and the fact that the president also Steve’s the audience just so that they can have a moment alone together and blaming the budget for the spoon this is very very very well played I couldn’t of done it better myself you didn’t amazing job and you should be proud of it I think this is one of my favorite story so far no with that said I do feel like there should be a little bit more to the story or to the script but outside of that everything else is perfect
Jun 01, 2020
Lol carefree people I love main character seems extra down to earth I wonder who will pass
Great first chapter you get to really understand the main characters personality
