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Hello fans my name is Richardo Smith and my company is ehanso. I’m a aspiring writer looking to have his book turned into a manga then into an anime and I hope you’d love to follow me along this journey of boundless hopes and flawless dreams.
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Sep 05, 2020
To:RajatX
I love the fact you said that because full blooded humans have been whipped out completely. And my first few chapters are kind of back story it gets better I promise. Thanks for reading
Sep 04, 2020
To:Ana Fowl
Next chapter fan service lmfao 🥰
Sep 03, 2020
Sarah’s special ability later I think you’ll love I put way to much thought into it lol. But she is really playful and smart .
Sep 01, 2020
Hmmmm... she is one of my favorites but without saying much I wonder if what your thinking is true
Aug 29, 2020
Lol odrian gets better. But the feeling you described Verona having is the feeling I was going for. Her being happy that her powers isn't making her a main focus
Aug 27, 2020
😍 I'm glad that scene reached you
Aug 26, 2020
(Shhhhhhh) don’t tell anyone lol... in all honesty I had fun writing this out and Sarah and victor have a very fun relationship
To:Gerry Hines
Lol power scaling is going out the door
That will be revealed way later I can’t wait to tell
Ziggy is one of my favorite characters to write he’s a riot
Aug 24, 2020
Ah I could see that I viewed it more as a fun couples conversation but I guess I need to look over some of this as well. Maybe it’s not needed but I do think it adds something unique showing their not a boring couple
Aug 22, 2020
Lol yes Sarah wants odrian to be loyal. But he doesn’t feel like he’s tied down to anyone. But I’m not a big fan of harems but i think you’ll grow to love where everything goes especially towards the end
I enjoyed this chapter a lot and how the characters interacted with each other. I thought to my self as they were half naked next to each other they act nothing like my characters lol. But that’s not a bad thing I did love everything that was going on. My only negative is with myself sometimes I find myself a little confused with were I am with all the flash backs or changes of scenery. But that’s a me issue your writing is fine
Aug 20, 2020
Jio felt the same. So I think I may work around it in some way but I thought due to race it was a fitting action. Sarah is a fan favorite
Aug 19, 2020
Honestly Verona was my main focus and this was just a glare into his past so it was just to make a slight connection but I do dwell deep into his mind in chapter 27 to build him up early in the series he is just living life. But I will touch this up a little bit
Thanks your feedback no matter how harsh or anything is always welcomed