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Hello fans my name is Richardo Smith and my company is ehanso. I’m a aspiring writer looking to have his book turned into a manga then into an anime and I hope you’d love to follow me along this journey of boundless hopes and flawless dreams.
What is an Achievement?
May 11, 2020
To:AuthorAtish
Wait till you see how their relationship develops
We love Verona too
May 08, 2020
You did a lot of world building in this chapter while making the story flow and not feel to boring I can’t say this was anything outsides flawless execution.
I’d also like to point out that After hearing about laws I would’ve been flipped out and asked questions.
I think from the narrative I might have a guess to Lucas law. Also in turn I think Rio is a whole problem lol. She’s making him a slave
May 05, 2020
To:Jio Kurenai
Thanks for all the feedback I love it and I’m glad I’m seeing improvements on my final draft I will add in all your comments and implement a lot of the needed changes for a better story
May 04, 2020
Jio I do ageee with you that it does feel a little too forced for the whole embrace part but she is part succubus and siren so I thought it was fitting of her race and character but I will look over that again to see if I can add more impact
May 03, 2020
May seems to be great I wonder how broken she really is
I really thought he was going to get the spell right
This chapter gives off the feeling of she won’t be fine. But non the less great world building I got a lot of information about their home town and ugh goats milk
Very good build up and use of dialogue not to lengthy either I enjoyed it
Mar 23, 2020
With the final version of this series I will make all these adjustments to make my story better but with your comments I will continue to grow
I love how you created your own form of magic and Hebrew seems cool if he’s a villian I think he’ll do an amazing job he didn’t care to keep failures
I’m really glad people love Ziggy I try really hard to make him a fun father
Yeah this Is just the beginning and thanks for the comment on the pacing I try my best to keep it on an anime level where it translates to an anime easy for later
And as for Ziggy hmmm I wonder he is loved by fans and plays all the big roles
Mar 14, 2020
Kudelia is cool I can see her playing an important role In his development. But we’ll see
The main character is still a big mystery but a lot more of the world is coming together Nora is cool and her familiar but the chapter ended with a great remark
